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Published: 2009-09-26 02:22:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 17; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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opening up hop a bookmiddle fold to center photo
a family warm embracing
a little green one warm
my mama whispered there
a Hobnobgoblin
a tiny whimpery warbly wuzzit
a wallfloorwalker tiptoe tapping
as raindrop quieter
in still life motion
was gentle dove diving down
now drown dragged by rope
last breath gasping
oh my love, love
by lungs water whooshing
Sleep deep z z z-ing
slow to a white blanket bright
an age as the sun
an age the moon
to rise and to fall and to dance
a delirious diamond dragon
flying screaming
flaming bursting cadences
of love's fearsome purity
burnt apart, finally
the book falls shut
with a quiet thud
and you walk and wonder
who made
such fantasies
Comments: 1
I like how you played with the idea of sounds in this. It made for a very enjoyable read, but when you try and decipher the meaning it's clear that there's something more serious behind the playful nature.
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