Comments: 17
ScottMan2th [2011-12-19 03:15:47 +0000 UTC]
All that glitters is facade
hiding darkness underneath
whispered screams
from nightmares past
looking for their path to flight...
For in a sea of tears we drowned
carried by emotions waves
looking for a light to guide
but clinging to a past
that drags us further underneath
trapped in circles of our making
puppets dancing... hidden strings
distorted mirrors twisting soul
aided by the twisting smoke
perfection seen by other eyes
-note- :Version two: much improved-
spotted the ever so slight lingustic error after posting... hope you like this (even if it is a bit dark(ish)
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ScottMan2th [2011-12-19 03:11:18 +0000 UTC]
All that glitters is facade
hiding darkness underneath
whispered screams
from nightmares past
looking for their path to flight...
For in a sea of tears we drowned
carried by emotions waves
looking for a light guide
but clinging to a past
that drags us further underneath
trapped in circles of our making
puppets dancing... hidden strings
distorted mirrors twisting soul
aided by the twisting smoke
perfection seen by other eyes
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BriZeey [2011-11-20 21:35:19 +0000 UTC]
I love it!
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sandpiperw In reply to teddybearcholla [2011-11-23 18:49:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks Barb I just can't seem to find the time
to do this anymore. I have a lot of ideas just no time. happy Thanksgiving to you and hope you are fine : hug:
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sandpiperw In reply to Ton-K300 [2011-11-23 18:50:25 +0000 UTC]
thanks glad you like this :hugs:
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Smoko-Stock [2011-11-19 05:03:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the link back to see how you used my Stock. Job well done.
Smoko-Stock
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sandpiperw In reply to Smoko-Stock [2011-11-23 18:51:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks Stephen and for your wonderful stock
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