Comments: 75
Shinseinasenshi [2015-06-16 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Heh... missed this one... Nice work.
Hey, ever heard of The Arrows Band? You might like them. It's just a couple of chicks from the U.K. telling it like it is. 😏 This reminded me of them for some reason.
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Shinseinasenshi In reply to sandracaskey [2015-06-17 20:08:07 +0000 UTC]
They have a cute little song called
"In The Words of Satan"
and a nice youtube vid to go with it you can find.
It's a little "out there" but that's fine with me.... ^^
Out there is nice.... xD
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Pasywna [2015-01-04 19:54:37 +0000 UTC]
It's a very difficult game.
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Pasywna In reply to sandracaskey [2015-01-04 20:13:19 +0000 UTC]
For me, the hardest actually.
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sandracaskey In reply to Pasywna [2015-01-04 22:20:52 +0000 UTC]
You're not alone. It's the hardest game I've ever played, too. But no matter the rules or the circumstances, you have the choice. You will always have the choice. So, no matter the difficulty, we all have the choice to fix it, end it, or go along with it. No matter how difficult the game is, help is given.
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Pasywna In reply to sandracaskey [2015-01-05 00:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Actually there's not much choice if you have someone you love and he loves you and you know how hard it would be if you have left him because you're all his life - so well, it seems like no choice for me, no matter how much I would love to choose an easier option
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sandracaskey In reply to Pasywna [2015-01-05 03:08:24 +0000 UTC]
Last year, I was overwhelmed by depression. Suicide was close to being my main goal. Options came up and they were the most difficult parts I've encountered in years. So, I chose two of them. 1). I leave my family, only keeping in contact with one member. 2). Leave the man, who took care of me and loved me for three years, to make myself happy again. I was precious to him. I was everything. I was supposed to move in with him last month, but things happened and I had to go. Everyday I think about him. I dream about him. But I wouldn't take it back. I cried for days when I made that decision. I will never see the cyan eyes I had fallen in love with. Those eyes are what I miss the most. Never got to figure out the secrets behind them.
I sometimes think I killed him.
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homosapiensis [2014-12-26 19:25:08 +0000 UTC]
"Where the option is yours." Love it. This just brightened my day!
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Regal-Pinion [2014-12-17 06:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Is it weird to say I read this imagining the same woman speaking but with two voices?
I enjoyed this quite a bit.
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RockAngelReika [2014-08-09 00:28:38 +0000 UTC]
wow, great job with the rhyming (I'm pretty much overstrained when it comes to writing in a more complex
way than abab rhyme scheme...xD) and I really loved the ending.
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EphemeralMonochrome [2014-08-03 00:38:31 +0000 UTC]
Such a wonderful and creative piece of writing....!
It really makes you think about your own life...
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Rakshiel-MoGaidren [2014-07-08 06:02:01 +0000 UTC]
I love poetry for life, words to make you think. Top effort
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doublenpower [2014-01-23 12:08:02 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible. How someone can write like this makes me speechless.
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Dejers [2014-01-21 04:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Got to the end, And I had to reread it. Very nicely done.
From the beginning I thought you might go a different direction, but the end was a nice surprise. Very thought-provoking and very true.
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DGVeil [2014-01-20 21:04:21 +0000 UTC]
I love it! ^W^
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DGVeil In reply to sandracaskey [2014-01-20 21:10:17 +0000 UTC]
OF COURSE! It was really good ^w^
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kirbyfight1 [2014-01-20 19:53:51 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! A great poem with a great straight rhyming scheme for the entire piece. Heck, I can't even do that!
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MissesUnlucky [2014-01-20 06:50:27 +0000 UTC]
Genius! I love this! It's whimsical, yet so real and thought provoking! Well done!
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socomsnake [2014-01-18 02:38:53 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful.
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