Comments: 16
ArianMicrob [2013-05-31 09:10:35 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work there
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alltheoriginalnames [2012-12-15 23:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Providing some constructive critique as requested in #projecteducate 's "Critique Extravaganza"
Being a fan of Fantasy I can guess what is happening in this seen, with some kind of turn undead spell cats by a good aligned cleric.
But people not with DnD or just casually into Fantasy may not understand the scene at all.
Textures are good, and lighting is adequate, though I feel the scene could benefit from far more dramatic lighting in order to emphasis both the power of the spell and add drama and suspense to the scene.
Point of view and perspective is not really adding much to impact the scene either. With such a scene I would expect a much stronger pov and perspective to engage the viewer in this combination of danger, horror, and enlightening power.
I like the posing of the characters, but I feel that they still seem a bit static. Especially the spell casting cleric.
I wish that there was some indication of the actual power that can turn an undead creature, repelling negative energy.
Powerful lighting, blow back from the spell, a forceful pose from the caster, all giving the impression that this is repelling a force of evil.
And I don't get that from this image at all unfortunately.
I like the idea of this, but I do not feel it was executed to it's fullest potential.
I would definitely like to see a much more dramatic and intense reinterpretation of this scene.
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SantusBrightblade In reply to alltheoriginalnames [2012-12-16 08:42:20 +0000 UTC]
wow! I really needed such an honest critique. I now stand disillusioned.
Thank you very much for your time.
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lucia45 [2012-12-04 22:06:28 +0000 UTC]
I am sensing some humor here in the drama. I love the skeleton's poses and their clothing, the guy with the light and the lighting and composition.
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Deepwallow [2012-09-18 09:45:35 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! And I love the skeletons XD Skeletons: THE LIGHT! IT BURNS!!!
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DeviouslyCD [2012-09-17 19:07:09 +0000 UTC]
this orb protects my virginity! jk, amazing scene you got there, reminds me of my runescape days
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