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sapfall — Breeze Redraw

Published: 2016-05-30 22:29:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 506; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description redraw of this picture from last august :3
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Comments: 12

Obliviousxx [2016-05-30 22:53:24 +0000 UTC]

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Vision

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Technique

Impact


This piece definitely improved from the last one. I enjoy the lighting of this one very much, and they way you look at it, yuou can almost feel the breeze. I like the added shadow of sap too. You used just the right amount of glowing sun-setting light to make a sheen on her from behind, and contrasting that with the shadow on her face. The flowers/roses crowning her head have perfect shading and shape. I like the newer style of thinner neck and longer fur too. Great job sap!

Now comes the icky part.
I think that the background could use more detail, but hey, much better than my backgrounds because I can't do them at all. I'm just saying that sap is very detailed next to the less detailed background. I do enjoy the tree style though. And I also adore the way the sky looks!!

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sapfall In reply to Obliviousxx [2016-05-30 23:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for writing the critique! I can definitely understand everything you said! :3

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Obliviousxx In reply to sapfall [2016-05-31 00:06:14 +0000 UTC]

of course !

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NoniDraws [2016-05-31 21:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Cute! I love the shading and background

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sapfall In reply to NoniDraws [2016-06-01 00:07:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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SirNeeko [2016-05-31 20:47:27 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome improvement!

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sapfall In reply to SirNeeko [2016-05-31 20:49:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!

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SirNeeko In reply to sapfall [2016-05-31 20:53:04 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  

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IvyHessil [2016-05-31 02:27:44 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfull shading!!

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sapfall In reply to IvyHessil [2016-05-31 02:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! <333

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Lesbology [2016-05-30 22:31:54 +0000 UTC]

LOOK AT THAT IMPROVEMENT

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sapfall In reply to Lesbology [2016-05-30 22:32:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG IKR I FEEL SO ACCOMPLISHED!!!

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