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Sarah--Elizabeth — Sushi Dress up Game
Published: 2012-04-24 16:31:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1429; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 14
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This is my sushi dress up game
its my second one ever so please let me know what i can do to make future games better 
Enjoy!
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Hahaha thanks <333
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I did this with flash for all the coding, and i drew all the pieces and background in photoshop
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Sorry, I'm a little late with my feedback. Here you go.
I had fun with this. I think the art is fun, perfect for this kind of application. The cute factor is in the stratosphere! I like the variety in the toppings. My favorite was the calamari (although I might add a slight black outline, or at least try it and see how it looks) maybe I'm wrong, but because of the color of the background, the calamari seems to pull back, doesn't pop as much as the rest of the toppings which are red or yellow based. I think a few black lines may fix it or maybe a change in color? Just a mild suggestion, and honestly the only thing I noticed that bugged me.
I love the little baby sushi person in the corner that screens when you click him. I also think the mustache is genius.
Some other ideas. These aren't problems, but just ideas I had while I was messing with it. So don't take these next suggestions as criticisms so much as "it would be cool if" kind of thing:
(1) If the toppings dropped down from above (out of screen) and kind of plopped on the head. For added flourish, the eyes could temporarily switched to squinted eyes when it hits.
(2) If the chopsticks did something. Not anything big, but I actually clicked on them before I clicked on the little dude. As far as what they could do... I dont know... something funny. What if they were like a clear button? Like if you click them the word "OMNOMNOM!" appears in an explosion bubble, obscuring your creation, and when the bubble disappears, your left with a clean slate. Also, when the OMNOM appears, the eyes on the little guy can change to scared eyes looking in the direction of the "OMNOMNOM", which would tie into the fact that it screams "Don't eat me!" when you click it.
(3) Since you have a mustache, add glasses and a top hat!
All in all, I loved this. Obviously it captured my imagination because you can see how much I got into the idea. I can't wait to play with your next creation!!
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yay thank you, and those are some great ideas! seriously i think im going to do the chopstick thing, and thank you your a delight
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No problem! I enjoy critiquing your work!
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Thanks i hope you like it :3
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i do, its very well done =3
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