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Kijara1 [2010-08-27 21:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Page looks fine to me - frames work out, composition works out. But maybe it's not like it 'looked in your mind', if you know what I mean?

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psychorooster [2010-08-26 13:17:59 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Kytri about Jamie's hand being the only thing you really need to change. I've been left standing awkwardly in a strange house before and those first three panels pretty much have a grasp on how uncomfortable it is before you finally suck it up and just sit down, haha.

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kytri [2010-08-25 22:31:07 +0000 UTC]

What all were you planning on changing? Personally I think the first three panels do a good job of capturing that awkward feeling of being left alone in a room in a strange house.

If you do redraw it the only thing I'd really suggest changing is the way Jamie's holding the mug in the last panel. The cup looks a little small in comparison to his hands, and I should think if it's hot he'd be holding it by the handle.

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Thepuzzlegirl [2010-08-25 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]

/knows how you feel there/

I think it turned out pretty well. Sometimes you kind of jus thave to movie on with some things and let them slide Worrying about it too much isn't good for you. ;__:

/has redrawn pages several times/

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