CaptainElsa [2015-06-11 17:27:38 +0000 UTC]
excellent shading! I love the details on her outfit.
You could work on anatomy and proportions a bit but other than that this is a really nice piece of fan art!
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CaptainElsa In reply to Saralia [2015-06-12 15:51:02 +0000 UTC]
oh, I mostly meant her neck and shoulders. To me I think her neck is a bit long and her shoulders are slumped down too much. I think her hands are fine! If you look at the picture that's just like this it might help; just type in "katniss on fire" in whatever your web browser is, it should show up in the first few results of photos.
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