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ptrgags [2017-11-29 02:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Wow, your paintings are always so pretty! keep up the good work!
I like the highlights on the foreground silhouette, they look really nice!
I also like the choice of blues in the sky, really pretty!
To give some constructive feedback, I only have two little things to say about the clouds:
At the edges of a few of the clouds, the brush looks like it's skidding across the canvas. Maybe pick a smoother brush? This is When I look at the entire painting, the clouds look really nice. When I look closer at the clouds, the highlights feel rather bright. Maybe decrease the lightness a little tiny bit? 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
SarcasmNymph In reply to ptrgags [2017-11-29 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]
I was actually thinking about reducing the brightness but it made the entire scene look too dull and uneventful. Maybe it was a composition fault but you have point. As far as the brushes go I am still experimenting with a new software so thanks for the tip I will keep it in mind
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ptrgags In reply to SarcasmNymph [2017-11-29 03:11:50 +0000 UTC]
Makes sense. Again, it does look fine when you stand back and look at the painting as a whole. Up close it feels a bit iffy but not sure what the best way to fix it is while keeping the contrast.
Gotcha, hope the new program works well for you!
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April-Engelmann [2017-11-28 15:29:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. I love the sky
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SarcasmNymph In reply to April-Engelmann [2017-11-28 22:09:41 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks. Given that's the main focus I am really glad you think so
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FractalRock [2017-11-27 20:11:03 +0000 UTC]
This is magic!
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KOMA-Tsunagi [2017-11-27 13:58:00 +0000 UTC]
beautiful!
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