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Emanhattan [2013-01-11 07:24:51 +0000 UTC]

this is fucking amazing! you have improved so much over the years

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lenkalamari [2013-01-09 07:22:59 +0000 UTC]

nice butt, as for critiques i think rtil and iink already said what i was going to say, aside from the fact that the sky should be more orange going by the tones you've shaded the characters in. other than that its good stuff and tells the story well. a good tip to avoid stiff poses is to go for a more 'asymmetrical' thing, for example i think tweaking one of the legs here to be lower than the other would help out a lot.

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rtil [2013-01-05 09:37:31 +0000 UTC]

i think for the bg lines could have been colored to draw less attention away from the girls who are in the foreground . it is a bit harsh black especially since some of the lines are thick, sometimes even thicker than the girls' outline. but it is a nice piece regardless. colors are good too. now put your nice colors on the linework too

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iuuai [2013-01-05 05:55:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome! the girl that's jumping though looks a little stiff, but still a fun looking picture nonetheless

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