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sashas — She, He, and They
Published: 2006-11-19 18:45:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 591; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 2
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Description She is broken, and I fix her. She is a maze, and I navigate her. She is a question, and I am the answer. Without me, she'd be alone. Without me, she'd crash.
Without me, she'd cease to exist.
I love her for wanting, and I lust for her for needing.
When she asks of me, I give. When she desires, I sacrifice. When she yearns, I yeild.
I don't care if she loves me.
She's like a drug. She's like cocaine. She's like ecstacy. She's like candy, and my sweet tooth never dies.
Heaven is with her, and Hell is without her.
I wish she'd love me.
I am broken, and she fixes me. I am a maze, and she navigates me. I am a question, and she is the answer. Without her, I'd be alone. Without her, I'd crash.
Without her, I'd cease to exist.

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He speaks the language of the flying pigs. It is the language of dreamers, of see-ers, of soul seekers.
He's a steady translator, a smooth operator. He has a glint in his eyes. He has a smile on his face and a thorn in his heart.
What is the sparkle for? Why are you smiling?
I want to be happy. In his arms, I am, only for a moment, a stitch in time.
I pull and push, and he sways like a nimble tree against the wind. He will not fail. He will not bend or break. But, will he uproot himself and flee?
I wish I could love him more.

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They sat at the playground. One swing for her, one for him. He barely swung, keeping his feet planted on the ground so that he may sway beside her. She was immobile, stationary as stone.
Nomally, the playground was filled with children--boys with their shorts way above their waistline and askew, girls dressed in pink, purple, or green as if their mothers had decided they were tiny dolls rather than children. But, the sun had just risen, painting an orange film over every surface.
She stared toward the sunrise with a blank face. He stared at her. Her lip was swollen. Her forehead was bleeding, and there were other injures physical and otherwise. Still, she was the most beautiful thing he'd ever set his eyes upon.
He coughed, mostly to make sure that he could actually make a sound in such silence rather than to clear his throat. "We've got to go to the hospital now."
She didn't move.
"I'll stay will you the whole time. I swear, I'll never leave your side." He moved his hand toward hers, and she shuttered. "I swear it." He move his hand more slowly toward hers. This time, she let him touch her. "Okay?"
She nodded without making eye contact.
He lead her to the car.

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I'll kill him if I ever see him again.
It was only her plea that stopped me this time.
I'll kill him, I swear.

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I follow my fellow speaker of the flying pigs. I feel nothing.
I cannot see the colors of the sunrise; I see only gray. I feel nothing as he touches me. I smell nothing. Nothing is beautiful. Nothing is ugly. Everything just is.

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He stays beside her. He never leaves. He speaks in a secret language and recites poems in their native tongue that tickle her ears, that keep her clutching his hand.
Nurses weave them into one room and then into another, hiding them behind curtains and sitting them on hospital beds. They examine her in places he would he had not dared to touch, in places that he once quivered to be near. The take picture of her from head to toe that would have counted as pornography under different condictions. They try to answer questions proposed by the police, but he has to answer as she can't seem to find the strength to speak. She nods or shakes her head at the yes or no questions.
He knows they suspect him. They want to speak to her, take her asside, but she only clings closer at every pull.
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Comments: 32

watergrave [2007-04-21 23:58:22 +0000 UTC]

OH how i envy your skills. htis is a very good piece.

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melllic [2006-12-04 17:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Sad story... T_T

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GatoNegroLoco [2006-12-03 06:39:01 +0000 UTC]

THIS STORY IS SASHAS WRITEN,
BUT GATO APPROVED. :B

*hits the fave*

an id love to beat the ass of whover did that to her. D:<

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enely [2006-11-27 23:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, MAD cool
Very ethereal. I had no idea writing could be so surreal ^^
I like the style a lot Different points of views

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sashas In reply to enely [2006-11-29 01:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. Heheh, I have a weird way of looking at things and connecting things together XD Especially when I'm writing for myself.

I'm very glad you enjoy it

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enely In reply to sashas [2006-11-29 01:54:36 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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polarifficchaos [2006-11-24 05:44:05 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOD! Amazing, pleeeaassssssse submit more writing!

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sashas In reply to polarifficchaos [2006-11-29 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]

LOL. Thanks very much I'm glad you enjoy my writing ^___^ I really appreciate it.

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Beloved-Loveless [2006-11-23 18:33:38 +0000 UTC]

i love this :]
all these different stories, and what-not.
your very poetic!

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sashas In reply to Beloved-Loveless [2006-11-29 01:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you

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Beloved-Loveless In reply to sashas [2006-11-29 02:39:22 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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xOverxThinkingx [2006-11-22 18:15:01 +0000 UTC]

this is really nice, it's not at all boring to read, it keeps you reading it ^^

one thing tho, is it, a boy that loves her, and then her, and then another guy that she is with or something? and then he beats her up? or no? or is it jus one boy?

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mynameisnotyoime [2006-11-21 05:49:49 +0000 UTC]

woooooooow. mixed emotions, and kinda deep for me to understand? xD poor english. but this is nice. ^^

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sashas In reply to mynameisnotyoime [2006-11-29 01:25:02 +0000 UTC]

My apologies. Yes, it is very difficult to understand... because of the style that it is written and because it it leaves alot of questions. This is just an introduction to a bigger story so perhaps if I continue with the story it will become more clear ^^

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anime-gal [2006-11-20 08:43:49 +0000 UTC]

That is just... so ..... good~ I felt sad reading it, it really touched my heart.

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sashas In reply to anime-gal [2006-11-29 01:22:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you were able to connect with it It's important to me that the viewer feel as they read :3 Thanks very much

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anime-gal In reply to sashas [2006-11-29 10:00:06 +0000 UTC]

your a really good writer~ I really liked reading it,

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KannyL [2006-11-20 07:10:36 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is really good!
I especially like the first part.

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sashas In reply to KannyL [2006-11-29 01:20:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much.

That's my favorite part as well~!

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PrisonerofConvention [2006-11-20 06:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and heartbreaking. It seems you are a brilliant writer as well as an amazing artist.

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sashas In reply to PrisonerofConvention [2006-11-21 08:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah, so nice of you say I'm pleased you like it ^^

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PrisonerofConvention In reply to sashas [2006-11-21 11:42:22 +0000 UTC]

As am I.

You're welcome.

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Kazuki88 [2006-11-20 02:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I like the fact that theres a lot of thought put into this writing! Nice job.

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Morike [2006-11-19 23:29:47 +0000 UTC]

that was beautiful! the different perspectives really add a twist that's nice to read.

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sashas In reply to Morike [2006-11-29 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad all of the points of view make it interesting

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Morike In reply to sashas [2006-12-02 14:35:39 +0000 UTC]

they do. It helped figure out what happened and what they're all feeling and stuff. I call that crucial for a story; because it's annoying when you don't know what's entirely going on (like when you're reading Shakespeare and not focusing on it, the words fly by and nothing registers).

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Jibril419 [2006-11-19 21:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful writing. Very emotive.

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sashas In reply to Jibril419 [2006-11-29 01:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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vorago-animus [2006-11-19 19:47:22 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwww...rather sweet..

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sashas In reply to vorago-animus [2006-11-29 01:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much ^____^

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BlueFirePyra [2006-11-19 19:16:25 +0000 UTC]

wow. i really like the style of this piece. it's interesting and shows the many sides of the stories all at once. I might have to try this some time. There are some small grammar and spelling mistakes, but other than that, it's perfect.

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sashas In reply to BlueFirePyra [2006-11-29 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you. Heheh, I did it this way because I could not decide which point of view as more interesting; so, why not all of them, I thought XD I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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