Comments: 32
watergrave [2007-04-21 23:58:22 +0000 UTC]
OH how i envy your skills. htis is a very good piece.
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melllic [2006-12-04 17:57:03 +0000 UTC]
Sad story... T_T
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GatoNegroLoco [2006-12-03 06:39:01 +0000 UTC]
THIS STORY IS SASHAS WRITEN,
BUT GATO APPROVED. :B
*hits the fave*
an id love to beat the ass of whover did that to her. D:<
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Beloved-Loveless [2006-11-23 18:33:38 +0000 UTC]
i love this :]
all these different stories, and what-not.
your very poetic!
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xOverxThinkingx [2006-11-22 18:15:01 +0000 UTC]
this is really nice, it's not at all boring to read, it keeps you reading it ^^
one thing tho, is it, a boy that loves her, and then her, and then another guy that she is with or something? and then he beats her up? or no? or is it jus one boy?
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mynameisnotyoime [2006-11-21 05:49:49 +0000 UTC]
woooooooow. mixed emotions, and kinda deep for me to understand? xD poor english. but this is nice. ^^
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sashas In reply to mynameisnotyoime [2006-11-29 01:25:02 +0000 UTC]
My apologies. Yes, it is very difficult to understand... because of the style that it is written and because it it leaves alot of questions. This is just an introduction to a bigger story so perhaps if I continue with the story it will become more clear ^^
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anime-gal [2006-11-20 08:43:49 +0000 UTC]
That is just... so ..... good~ I felt sad reading it, it really touched my heart.
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anime-gal In reply to sashas [2006-11-29 10:00:06 +0000 UTC]
your a really good writer~ I really liked reading it,
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KannyL [2006-11-20 07:10:36 +0000 UTC]
wow. this is really good!
I especially like the first part.
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sashas In reply to KannyL [2006-11-29 01:20:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much.
That's my favorite part as well~!
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Morike [2006-11-19 23:29:47 +0000 UTC]
that was beautiful! the different perspectives really add a twist that's nice to read.
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Morike In reply to sashas [2006-12-02 14:35:39 +0000 UTC]
they do. It helped figure out what happened and what they're all feeling and stuff. I call that crucial for a story; because it's annoying when you don't know what's entirely going on (like when you're reading Shakespeare and not focusing on it, the words fly by and nothing registers).
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Jibril419 [2006-11-19 21:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful writing. Very emotive.
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sashas In reply to Jibril419 [2006-11-29 01:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you :3
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vorago-animus [2006-11-19 19:47:22 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwwwww...rather sweet..
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sashas In reply to vorago-animus [2006-11-29 01:18:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much ^____^
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BlueFirePyra [2006-11-19 19:16:25 +0000 UTC]
wow. i really like the style of this piece. it's interesting and shows the many sides of the stories all at once. I might have to try this some time. There are some small grammar and spelling mistakes, but other than that, it's perfect.
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sashas In reply to BlueFirePyra [2006-11-29 01:18:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thank you. Heheh, I did it this way because I could not decide which point of view as more interesting; so, why not all of them, I thought XD I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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