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My last Naruto OC! This is Yoshiro-sensei from Team 5 ^^ I drew and coloured him ages ago (so please forgive the bad colouring ^^") but never wrote about him till today. Anywaz ... yeah, here he is! Hope you like him :3Related content
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He's missing an eye
That's good enough for me!
You're really great at drawing
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Haha, thanks a lot! Dunno if he's lost an eye though. Yeah he wears an eyepatch but it could be like a Kakashi thing where he's hiding his eye. Haven't really decided yet >___<
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well if he is hiding a kekkei genkai, make it as Byakugan...there are too many sharingans in the manga already
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Lol, I wanted somethin different though. An idea that was splashed around was that he could have a purple eye that perhaps his grandfather had which could allow him to slow down whoever he's lookin at. I haven't had any other good ideas so ... dunno, gotta do more thinkin >___<
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Well you can go for a new kekkei genkai.
An eye with a "Ground Zero" type ability.
What does Ground Zero means?
It's simple...An invisible field is created around you, 1 mile in diameter...it reduces chackra down to 0, and it can overpower other kekkei genkai, nullifying them..in other words it makes a shinobi normal.
Now all it comes down to is if your psychical strength is bigger than your opponent's.
As for the price of usage, I'll leave that up to you.
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Oh wow, that sounds awesome! Oooo, very nice idea 
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Well since it turns everything down to 0, that also includes his own chackra.
Nobody will gain the upper hand in this case.
It all comes down to how much you trained your body.
Doesn't necessarily mean your raw str. But your ability to make quick decisions, reaction time, having a clear head, staying cool under the pressure etc.
If Yoshiro is well trained in weapons combat, and in stetting traps, then he will take down any enemy no matter how big they are.
Someone like Shikamaru would prob be the best suited for this ability, cause if he had such an ability, he would beat everyone in the manga, cause nobody except for his father even thinks smart like him.
I'm thinking the price should be complete purge of his chackra for 24-48 hours...in other words, when he ends the ability, he simply collapses due to insufficient life energy.
This makes it a double edged sword, cause if an enemy finds your body, you're done for
So this should either be used where you're 100% sure nobody will come by for the next 1/2 days, or if you have a friend with you who can carry you back to the village.
This ability was originally meant for my OC Zero, the prince of Soul Society, but since I can't draw there's no use in just having it in my mind.
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Oh wow, so that's why you have so much info bout it XD Haha, doesn't matter if you can't draw, you should go for it anyway! Try you're best to make a ref or ask someone else to do it for you. Then you could ask other artists to draw him for you! It's great if it could be a free request but, it's hard to find people who do requests nowadays so it'd have to be a commission =____= Still, it's awesome when other people draw your character
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I really tried drawing...but it came out grotesque.
It's prob because I don't draw those lines which are used to judge where to position the eyes, nose, mouth etc
Anyways, drawing my own OC is to boring, and I'm lazy as hell
If it's commissions, I have a few thousand points
I'm just stacking them up for no good reason
Hehe, it's great that both you and your sister are into manga/anime.
Mine is too busy hanging out in clubs with boys in pink shirts/pants wearing sun glasses at 3AM cause it gives them the impression that they're cool
Right...new ability.
Raigeki (yes, the same name as in Yu-Gi-Oh! ).
It has two abilities.
1. Final view (it's called that for a reason)
2. Eternal Servitude (Passive, which means it's always active for one instance)
When you activate Raigeki, Final View is automatically triggered.
3 spell circles are formed.
The biggest one stays on ground, while the middle one rises to the level of the threes with the third and smallest one up to where the clouds are.
The diameter of the circle depends on your current mana level.
After all 3 circles finish setting up, it will start devouring both your chackra and that of your opponent's.
It has a charge time of 1 minute and in under that time it will have eaten your entire chackra and that of your opponents.
Aside from eating your chackra, it also slows you down each 5 seconds, until your unable to move.
So if you're not out of its field fast, you're dead.
After 1 minute has passed, and the charge is finished, an eye is formed at the highest point, meaning the third spell circle.
That eye, starts siphoning the chackra it collected, and shortly after it releases it in one giant burst of energy, disintegrating everything in it's field of vision.
That also includes you, so if you use this ability, you can kiss your body goodbye.
I say body because a split second before the beam reaches the ground, "Eternal Servitude" activates.
Your body is destroyed, but your spirit lives on.
You are now free to posses another person of your choosing.
The possession doesn't take place immediately, rather you lie dormant, gaining the strength required to devour that person's soul.
The only time "Eternal Servitude" is not active is during Raigeki, and that's the only time somebody can actually kill you.
Otherwise, if you die without activating your kekkei genkai, you will never truly die because of E.S.
As for what other OC's:
- Zero (there's way too much info I have about him, so I'll keep it short): prince of SS, who's reiatsu is unrivaled in his completed form.
He defused his own soul, to fully materialize his zanpakuto.
Ever since then, he can't bankai nor shikai.
He fights with reiatsu manipulation, meaning he molds his reiatsu into whatever he likes.
Usually it's a sword resembling his zanpakuto in non-skikai form.
His reiatsu is black with blue lightning when un-fused, and Azure with red lightning when fused.
Extremely perverted. He'll peek under the skirt of each hot babe, and will always try to land a f**k
He wants to kill his father, and reform SS to his own liking....with his nature, it will prob be a harem
- Alice: His zapakuto, now fully materialized.
Elemental type zanapakuto.
Can go shikai and bankai.
Loves Zero, and will always beat the living s**t out of him whenever he tries to hit on another girl.
Likes cute things very much, and likes to make this face "X3" when seeing them.
Her reiatsu is red.
Nimrod, Zero's father and the king of SS.
Obsessed with power so much so that he effected experiments on himself to make himself more powerful.
Overtime, he became a grotesque monster, outgrowing his own body and becoming a giant monstrosity that would make u sh*t bricks
I have more for bleach, but won't list them
For naruto:
- Inarius:
The true father of jutsu, and the father of Rikudo.
Immortal with over a thousand yeas.
Posseses the true Rinnegan, which looks similar to the Jiubi's eye. A sharingan with rinnegan lines.
Possesses every single kekkei genkai ability, and can cast any jutsu without hand signs.
Has taken the role of a god, standing by and watching things develop.
He looks like a 25 year old guy, but can take any shape or form.
He took a liking in Konoha, and changed himself into a boy 11-12 years of age.
Joined the academy for the lulz, and spent his days trolling his colleagues.
He took a liking to a girl, and is looking after her.
Also hates a boy.
He's part of team 7.
Kula Uchiha (Team 7):
The girl Inarius took a liking.
The black sheep of the Uchiha clan.
While being somewhat smart, she utterly fails at jutsus and can't even activate her sharringan.
Because of this, her family sorta shunned her, and when speaking to her, they always remind her what a failure she is.
She wanted to commit suicide, but was stopped by Inarius.
She gradually develops feelings for him, but won't admit them. (Inarius catches on from the get go, and always teases her about it *his trolling nature knows no boundaries*)
She was finally able to awaken her sharingan when she saw Inarius half dead about to die (he just faked it tho, since he's an immortal he usually let's people beat him up, and when they tire out, he commences the trolling).
This was at the age of 18, so it took her 6-7 years just to awaken the sharingan (with one tomoe).
Left the village behind because of her sensei and other team partner betrayal.
Jaden Hyuga (team 7):
The pride of the Hyuga clan. Good looking, smart, a talented shinoby who likes to flaunt his power left and right.
Awakened the byakugan at the age of 3.
Vast amounts of chackra. By the age of 18, his chackra reaches jinjuriki levels.
Learns about the secret of immortality from his sensei, and betrays his team-mates.
Get's his throat broken, his eyes gauged, and his arms shattered by Inarius when he tried to sacrifice Kula.
Survives the incident and get's rescued by his sensei.
He is later killed by Inariu's amaterasu.
Kyle Katarn (Jounin team 7):
And elite shinoby that makes Kakashi looks like a prick with his d**k in the sun
Has the genius level of Shikamaru, but is constantly hungry for power.
Researches the secret to immortality after he found some permanents in Inarius's apartment during an inspection.
His fav student is Jaden, which he let's in on the secret.
They plan to achieve immortality, buy sacrificing Inarius and Kula to the Shinigami.
Is killed by Kula by having his heart pierced 2 years after the betrayal incident.
I have more, but damn am too lazy to list them
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Omg wooooooooooooooooooow, that's amazing! You've really thought long and hard about your characters XD That's seriously great though. You should definitely commission someone to draw them out, I bet they'd look badass XD About my character Yoshiro's power, I've told my sisters your idea and they like it but not enough to solidify it to my character so we're gonna keep thinkin bout it =____= I gotta draw him soon though bcz my sister wants me to make character sheets for her team too ¬____¬ Yeah, truth is, I only got into anime because of my sister almost 4 years ago XD
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If he has a different color eye, that indicates he is a twin (and considering no mention of said twin, the twin probably died either during pregnancy or during labor). Aside from that (or even with that included), sounds like a pretty awesome character. What's his signature technique?
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Ooo, I didn't think of that but it's a good idea. I haven't decided on his signature technique yet but it will have something to do with his eye
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Haha, kinda like how Kakashi has his Sharingan he always keeps hidden unless he's fighting someone formidable. Nice. Element?
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Yeah, something like that, but I was thinking that maybe he could slow down enemies when he looks as them with his eye or somethin like that 
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Hmmm. . . isn't Naruto already Wind and Water? Water and Lightning's pretty awesome. He could throw a wave at them and, should they get wet, they would be a lightning conduit.
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I thought Naruto was only wind o____o But yeah, Water and Lightening sounds good too. Gotta think about it ^^
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Naruto's primary is Wind, but they say he's gonna have Water as secondary to combat Sasuke's Fire elements.
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Oh really? Wow, I never heard that o___o Makes sense though ... so I guess I should go for the other one XD
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It would be more original. I can't think of any other Water/Lightning ninjas.
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True. Cool then, guess that'll be his combo
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Lol really nice 
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Haha, thanks a lot ^^ Ummm, I don't think you read it properly at the bottom. It says that Yoshiro is gullable and Yukio takes advantage of that XD
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aha, yea i took notice of another of your drawings the Yukio chunnin
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Yeah, he's from my Team 5 and Yoshiro is their sensei ^^
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OOOOOOOOOoooo he's hooooooot!!!!!! Why do you keep torturing me like this!?!?! You draw too many hot guys!!! But that's a good thing cuz me likey hot guys lol! But gosh I wish they were real!!! It would be the best if anime was real and that was the world and we were all anime people!!!
He's soo hot!! 
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Lol, I know, that would be the ideal world! Thanks a lot for your comment ^___^
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your welcome!
That would certainly be my heaven!!
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wow....he's hot Sass...green eyes...eye patch....brown hair...*drools.
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Lol XD Thank you ^^ He actually had a purple eye under the eyepatch. I should draw him one time without the eyepatch on :3
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Ooooo would love to see that!
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