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satine1314 — My End
Published: 2006-12-08 21:06:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description My body weakens and weakens
as the days move.
The soul I had
has left without me.
The heart that throbs
stopped beating to the point of break

The smile many remember
is not the same
The happiness in my life
remains without me

Those that “love” me
have left me to die
Those that tried to take me
succeeded

The one that promised me the world
was taken by my own depression

It is I
who caused this
and it is I who has come to an end.
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Comments: 6

kjhbones [2007-05-30 20:59:26 +0000 UTC]

i don't know, but this poem reminds me of the Linkin Park song In the End

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no-way-out-till-dawn [2006-12-12 05:18:42 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!!! It makes me kind of sad and wonder what is really going on in that head of yours these days.

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maxitaxi10 [2006-12-10 02:06:00 +0000 UTC]

very good jacque, another accomplishment done beautifully

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satine1314 In reply to maxitaxi10 [2006-12-10 04:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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maxitaxi10 In reply to satine1314 [2006-12-10 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]

ALWAYS WELCOME!!

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chealsey [2006-12-08 21:38:38 +0000 UTC]

i liked it! nicely done! =]

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