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Satosanteru β The Things That Make Us Strong part 1
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Published: 2013-12-30 03:32:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 76958; Favourites: 709; Downloads: 0
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Here we go! Another short Doujinshi. It will be longer than my last one, but a LOT shorter than the big one I'm planning. In truth, I'm still trying to find the guts to start that project. This story is a 'what if' scenario of what I think would have happened if Naruto had turned four tails when he was a Genin on a mission or something. It's pre-Chuunin-exams. And it's definitely SasuNaru, shounen-ai.I would really appreciate your comments on this series, for both the story and the art, especially the art; I'm trying a completely foreign color palette for me, so a different look/feel. I wasn't sure at first, but now I quite like it. Well, you let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy it ^_^
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O_o HOLY SHIIIITAKE MUSHROOMS!!!!!!
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Found it, lol. Your chapters are in a weird order in your gallery
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Although this is my favorite(so far), I love all your doujins! The artwork is just amazing. Β
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Wow four tails? What on earth happened?
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All will be revealed in later chapters
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Can't wait. This is really good!
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Is it weird that I think the Four-Tails is cute?
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Not at all i've always thought that
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I'm not the only one!!!! *dramatically falls to knees*
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Holy shit the way you do Four Tails is just fucking amazing. Hnnng. All of my fangirliness!! Like holy shit. The way he pops from the page, the general just--everything. All of it. Everywhere. I LOVE the power you can absolutely feel inching off of him in waves. It's perfect~! I also love your use of expressions to convey thoughts and emotions in this one. Also, I feel bad for Kakahsi. This is probably one of the worst things that could happen to him on a missions. 
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Love putting my favorite characters through hell and then healing them. Kakashi is no exception!!!
As much as he is a pain to color, I really enjoy drawing Kyuubi mode. I'm happy you approve of him and the color palette. If AcrylicHeart approved, then all is well with the world.
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I know what you mean uwah~ I tend to torture the ones I love most. Angst is my life's blood I tell you! And oh you~ o3o <3
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Much angst! Too love! Wow x
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Oh hell Sasuke!!
I donΒ΄t ship SasuNaru just NaruSasu but this looks great.
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Thank you for all your comments on my art ^_^
Well, I don't mind either Either version of the pairing, I think they're pretty equal anyways and take turns. This doujin isn't heavy on either, they're too young for me to put them in a very intimate situation.
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What made Naruto transform in the first place?!
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Not sure. Physical and/or emotional duress. I may or may not explore that later, depending on how long I make the story and whether I get a solid idea for why he went kyuubi
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Oh...well I can't wait for part 6!
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At last panel you forgot to put sharingan on his eye look closely his sharingan must be on his left side
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True! Too late now, and his pupil would be too small to fit in there anyways.
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in the fourth plane kakashi says,"ino,sasuke!!"
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Look closer, its "No, Sasuke!"
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Nice drawing. I like how nice and clean everything looks. And the story has to interest as well.
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Looks awesome so far, can't wait for more
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So amazing! Can't wait for more pages 
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Wow this looks awesome!
I look forward for more! ^__^
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Amazing art. I've never seen KN4 drawn like that. Really good job, you've got some real talent. Although I'm wondering how this was possible pre-Chuunin-exams since Jiraiya didn't start messing with the seal until the time skip. Did Kakashi mess with it instead? Maybe by accident?
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Thank you very much. To be honest I didn't even think of the seal. I don't even know what provoked Naruto. I've just focused on the fact that he's 4tails and have gone from there. So really, it's up to the reader to imagine how he may have changed. It's possible that Naruto inadvertently weakened the seal himself...not sure xD
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Wow, this is fantastic. I wanna see more.
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This looks really interesting... The art is amazing as always especially the four tails mode Β and the color palette you used looks really great... Keep up the good work..^_^ Em looking forward to your big doujinshiΒ
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Thank you so much! x
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no problem dear^_^
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg! I want an update really soon!Β
And guts to start a project, why? Do you think you won't be able to devote enough time to it and won't be able to finish and think it's a huge responsibility or is is another reason? I'm curious, because if it the support you're worried about, DON'T BE. Watchers are very faithful~Β
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You said it exactly right. I have a hostory of startng big fan projects and not finishing them. Though, they were all fanfictions, and I abandoned them - we're talking 100+ pages each story. The ones I never posted, well that's okay cause no one knows they exist. But the one I did start posting is just sitting there and I'll probably never finish it. And it sucks for the readers...I just read an incomplete NaruSau fic, one of the best I've ever read and I was so disappointed that I couldn't find out what the author had planned.
Likewise I would never want a doujinshi artist to stop their work cold, especially a very long one. And I don't want to do it to myself and to people who enjoy my work. There's also the fact that this project is big, probably 200+ pages when complete. It would be epic if I did it, and so much work. So much time goes into just one page. It's daunting. So I've procrastinated with mini doujins lol. Anyways, thanks for your support, your words definitely make the difference.
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