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Published: 2017-03-31 04:44:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 7185; Favourites: 578; Downloads: 14
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-shrug-This is my first time trying something new.
I watched a speedpaint and liked the technique. Anyway, here ye go!
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The over-all piece is ok, I enjoy the flesh tones you used for the piece as they compliment the hair, but the galaxy background is too overpowering because it clashes with the hair and it makes it seem like the hair is fading into the background.
Also, I see you're going for a semi-realistic style. This is good practice, but you'll need a bit more practice with realism and figure sketching/anatomy drawing if you want to achieve what you're going for.
Also, just a word of advice, I see you are using a lot of warm tones, but have you considered cooling down the subject of focus to make her pop more? Their's too much saturation on the piece and it's a bit of an eyesore. Other that that, good job, with practice your digital illustrations will go far.
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This piece has a lot off great ideas, but I feel that they get muddled. Though "forlorn girl against a galaxy background" isn't exactly the most original idea I've ever seen, the execution behind it makes it interesting to look at.
The color palate is in the same family as the background, but the values you used made the girl in the foreground really pop. On that note, I can see how you used a lot of purple for the shading, but you're also slipping in to using a lot of black, which makes the skin have a harsh and unnatural look at some points.
As for her overall appearance, I do like it. I think that you're really trying to find a style in your art, and unfortunately that makes this piece look a bit sloppy. Her hair has a weird stringy-yet-blended look, but her eyelashes look entirely blended in, almost like oil paints. Her mouth has a very wet-yet-defined look, and that makes them pop out a bit too much. Her ear is also very, very far back, almost as if it's disconnected from her head.
Her skin looks amazing though. I really love the base colors you used, and the freckles give her this innocent look that really lends to the impact of the piece. Whenever I leave notes on your art, I always tend to mention the anatomy, and praise your color palates, so I know it's nothing you haven't heard before - but I always want to let you know that I always see improvement in your work, and this piece is no different.
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your art piece is pleasing of the eye and I like how much detail you put and the color scheme matches the colors of the galaxy little tip? next time make the neck a little bit longer, don't make the chin to long and the eyebrows are to thin and make them a little bit thicker.
And the bottom eyelashes needs to have a little flow because it kinda looks dotted if you wanted to make it look semi-realistic look up a reference for eyebrows and eyelashes mostly the bottom eyelashes next time but everything else your artwork is good.
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I would like to start off with saying that the choice of colours is lovly. You also managdd to give the face a feeling of depth, wish is really nice. I like the soft shading on the cheeks with brings forward a natural warmth and roundness. The anatomy and proportions on the face is also decent and the face has a very nice shape overall.
However, one thing that I noticed is also the choice of colors. The one you used to shade the face. Its good that you dare to use darker colours, but the tone and shade you used seems to close to black, which leaves a muddy and dirty look the drawing. Im also not a fan of the way you drew the eyebrows. Its just a solid colour in a smudged line. That combineed with the shading makes the forehead area and eyebrows look very dirty.
I would advice putting more details on the body. Compare the face it doesnt fit having it so plain. There neck and shoulder area is a very pretty and fun thing to play around with. I think if you added more shading, detail and a more interesting pose with the shoulders and the neck that this piece would be alot more interesting and complete.
Another thing I would like to point out is the placement of the ear. If you look at the ear you can see its placed on the side of the neck, or on the back of the head. The ear should be placed behinde the jaw, parallell to the eyebrows and the nose tip.
The lips feels also a bit out of place compared the style of shading on the face. Theyre a bit to hard around the lines. I think if you would soften them up a bit it would fit alot better in with the rest of the face.
Personally I feel like the hair is very simple and not fitting compared to rest of the drawing. It looks very messy, especially at the top of the head, where the hair parts. Personally I think it would fit alot better if the hair had alot more softer, fuller strokes instead of the super thin and hard lines.
Overall this drawing is decent. The colours are lovely and you managed to get an atmosphere with the expression and shading. There are alot of thing you need to work on. I think it would help if you focused more on anatomy and colour theory.
Please excuse me english, and I hope this helps you improve.
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This is some stunning work! The effects and use of colors really make it a crown jewel to me.
The shading is well done and how it rounds her face just right. The outlines used are very soft and easy, except for that small spot at the back of her neck which seems just a tad too thick (it could be hair, but I'm unsure).
The center of the piece, that really pops out to me, has to be her face alone. The details of the freckles and the shadow from her hair over her face is astonishing. Even the glistening tears in her eyes and those soft lashes had been done with such care. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
The background added behind her really fits the overall theme and expression she has. I love work like this and I had to stop by and just stare at it for like... five minutes.
*v*
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sav, its frightening how good you are at drawing. I really like this piece because the colors go together really well, also your anatomy, brush stroke technique, and background are really well done a look like a artist who knows what they are doing made this piece of art. I also like the emotions i get when i see this art, and i can see what you were going for. The only problem i have with this piece is that there are a lot of galaxy characters ( i made one but haven't posted it yet), so it would've been better if it was the stars or moon or something, other than that, this is really good artwork, keep up the amazing work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Hope you don't mind me dropping in a lil' critique here. Overall, it's a nice piece of art. The colour choices fit well together and the character is showing a decent amount of expression. Although, I'm going to be harsh and nit-picky.
The blending on the skin could've been done better and had more care put into it. (Or, turn the 'hardness' of the brush down.) There's a gap between the skin colour and the sketch on one side of her shoulder, and on the other side, it's spilling over the sketch? It almost takes away from painting-like look of the piece in general. I quite like her hair but it doesn't follow the light source very well. The last thing is the eyebrows. I'm not sure if you were going for a semi or full realistic look here on this painting or not, but eyebrows aren't generally one solid entity. (For lack of a better word) Eyebrows are made up from tiny, tiny hairs following (often) the same direction. Using a galaxy like this is a rather common thing unfortunately, so maybe try spanning out into doing something like this with a different colour scheme or something. Overall though, it's an appealing piece of artwork, that's pleasant to the eyes. I just think there are a few things you could tweak and adjust.
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Really bad so 1 star
It look bad cause stereotype, stereotype bad ok
She look fat and fat people bad k
Her Lip not blend so bad
Her hair short so bad
Lol call me fat shame all want but I don't care lol
Fuck this piece of shit art
Call me art bad all want but I art and yiu not k
I don't like u video cause they give no critique. I give just as much critique u do k. Bye bye bad rant er
Love nekolovekis aka harukakaroka aka an art theif aka the person that can take this drawing down
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The colors stand out to me very nicely and they blend well, however, the left shoulder looks a little awkward with the rest of the piece, only because there seems to be no separation between it and the girl's chest and its a tad oversized for the body. It's a nice piece in all, and I love the freckles! Also, the strands of hair toward the top are a little messy, and need touch ups, because they don't seem to be coming from where the roots are. I also noticed that her ear seems a little stretched and if the hair were to be removed, I'd imagine it being a little far off her head. All in all, I love this work and I'd love to see more like this!
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Sav, this is a lovely peice of work, however i think there should be a little more black to give it the space effect, and the eyes a tad bit darker. just a suggestion e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
But, i think there should be more stars so it looks like she is in space for a suggestion. I love the way you added the pink to the background as well!
Over all, this is a VERY nice peice of work Sav!
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This is the best piece I've seen from you. I like the shiny eyes and lips because the highlights are just right. I also like the freckles because it reminds me of the galaxy and fits well with the theme. The pink eyes compliment the freckles very well. The only thing I have to say about the eyes are that the lashes are oddly thick at the bottom. The shading is too flat and could definitely use some work. I'd like to see more definition in the picture, but not too much like in the ear which doesn't look that much like a real ear. The shading on the shoulders and neck looks too light and flat and feels rushed. The haircut is decent, But I don't think you should put individual strands because it looks like you are trying to do realism but failing miserably. Galaxy is often overused, but you made it look good in this picture. I like it. It's really pretty despite my critiques, which may sound horrible.
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The expression in her eyes matches the colors that you picked: gentle, maybe even a little sad. The "spray-painted" background keeps the feeling going; your colors don't stray far from the emotions felt while staring into her eyes. Her matching hair is beautifully distinguished from the background. It looks very soft, just as she does.
There's a little issue with the anatomy. It looks like the ear is a bit too far away from the head and too far down her neck. It's hardly noticeable, especially with that hair in the way! Also, her neck and shoulders seem a little blank. You don't HAVE to add a collarbone or a tendon or muscles, but it would've given the viewer a bit more to look at other than her face.
In my opinion, you did really well with the shading and the look on her face. I can't get over how much emotion is in this picture. It's almost like she's standing right in front of me. The more that I look at it, the more things that I enjoy about it. You did great!
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Ahh. Good old Galaxy aesthetic. First off, I would like to say I adore this piece, and as soon as I am done writing this critique I will favourite it. The colouring and shading are phenomenal, and i like the originality and vision you have of this piecce. I would say something you can do to make it look better would be the actual line art. I see where it's kinda sketchy, and that's good if that's what you're going for. I feel like the ear is a little out of place, and I would try to work the hair around it. I would also try to make the hair look less stiff on the side where the ear is. Other than that it's great
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This piece is extremely beautiful! The colors and details put into this appear to be thought through and extremely pleasing to the eye. It seems you've spent a LOT of time on this and definitely deserve all of the positive comments that people have made.
There is only one thing that bothered me a little bit; the neck seems a bit too short. I can see how it works a little bit if her head was tilted down, but it'd still seem too short if she lifted her head up. This may just be nitpicking but that was just what stood out the most to me.
Please keep doing more art like this, it's really shows your skills! <3
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Right so i obviously really like the choice of color you picked (really pleasing to the eye!) But I'd say that you work on the hair a little because it looks .. blended? Of course having a blended type hair with some strands isn't bad but it just looks off with a cartoony like face, you could try to pick if you want a realistic style of hair or a cartoony style ( or maybe something in between). I also think that maybe the shading is a little too dark on the face? just a tiny bit. But over-all i really enjoyed looking at this piece and i hope that you improve a lot and prove yourself and even better artist than you already are!! great job Sav!!
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I Like this! But you shouldΒ make the neck a bit longer.
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I love the colors that you used for this picture! You did a great job! Then again, you always do a great job.
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GODDAMIT SAV WHY DOES YOUR ART HAVE TO BE SO AMAZING!?!?!?
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THIS.IS.AMAZING.i love the colour and emotion,normally i like SUPER cartoony stuff but this is an exeption,this is by far your best piece
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The colors in this piece are good choices! This is absolutely amazing!
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I admit that you are a MUCH better artist than me. This doesn't relate to the drawing but I just wanted to say how amazing this is BEFORE laying down salt on your channel. I understand you go through lots, I have the same views as you. But maybe you should try being a bit nicer? Also, I love this drawing. Constant fan.
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Omg so beautiful! I love the colors and just everything about this π
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I love it, the eyes and the hair beautiful, i also love the way you draw realism im horrible at realismΒ
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I really love this picture. OwO (And I also love how did ypu draw the lips. :3)
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I think it needs more detail in the collarbone, but overall it's really great!!!
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Β Hello! I'm sad to inform you, but someone stole your artwork.
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WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING? STEALING MY ART.
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You're a dumbass
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you idiot, Savdraws signed it!
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Check the right (our left) shoulder. The left has the original date on it. If you had eyes, you might notice it.
And how did she get "your" art if this was posted a month ago, whereas yours was posted just yesterday?
Did Sav hack into your computer to get your art, just so happening to find a drawing with the exact date signed and post it then?Β
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Hey, there's a little something called UPLOAD DATES.
This was posted like a month before you joined.
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You're nothing but lies honey, check out the details of a submission it'll show you that you're lieing to yourself.
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Check the submission details before being stupid at trolling. Β Regardless if you're doing it for fun or for all the negative attention (which I still don't understand), take YOUR stuff down or be banned from DA.
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Liar. She made this LAST MONTH, while you uploaded it a mere few minutes ago.
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You've improved a lot in drawing hair, good job!
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someting about the portions are off but like the neck i thick is off and the shoulders look odd Β and something about her face portions but the coloring is awasome idk Β
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Wow. Really beautiful!
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