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ATTACK HIM UPENDO! WHEN HE ISN'T LOOKING!
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No, Upendo, don't kill Scar! >.< Arrrrrgh...
... But... uh... Scar... could you please not kill Upendo either? :s
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Uru has no eyes... 0.o In the top square...
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I think because Savu can't draw them that small.
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tbh i actually liked the pridelands looking like this
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what happened to Uru's eyes? she looks like a stuffed animal.
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XDDD Upendo looked like Kovu for a moment, just that he has no guts
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Question....is this still part of your remake story or a new one? ^^"
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still a remake, but with some changes
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Ooh okay.
Cuz I don't rember some things XD
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yes, this scene is new^^
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I really like it so far!! I really hope Upendo somehow lives 
Oh, by the way, I would like to correct Uru's sentence in her last panel: "...At least that's what I hope" not "atleast that it what I hope" 
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IΒ΄m in ur comments, being a smartass...
But nah, here is my 2 cents on english. IΒ΄ll go back to the previous pages once school allows and look at those too...
"Uru, what happened to all the grass? It looks so weird."
"ItΒ΄s dry season. The grass withered, because it needs water to grow. The land is sleeping at the moment, but once the dry season is over, it will become beauriful again... atleast (or without the atleast) that is what I hope."
"There he is! Far and wide no hyenas to protect him!"
- Grass is a collective noun, so itΒ΄s in plural already. Like the word sheep...
- Landscape isnΒ΄t the right word here, itΒ΄s used to refer to paintings, usually. As in "this is a photo of a landscape".
- I would put "Right now the land is sleeping"... just cause I think it sounds better. But what you have is more than fine too!
Hope it helps
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'Uru, what happened to all the grasses? It looks so weird.' 'It's dry season, the grass is withered because there is little water for them to grow. At the moment the landscape is sleeping, but it will be beautiful again when dry season ends....'
'There he is and no hyenas in sight to protect him!'
Thought that might help
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thank you very much 
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Yee, I'm so glad I could help. I LOVE the storyline so much! And I'm glad you didn't make Nala's father Mufasa (which seemed to be the thing in the movies, since they never gave who fathered her o_o) and you keep true to the character's personalities even in new situations and with different cast!
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thanks...well, I think it would be a little bit weird if Mufasa was Nala`s father too. I know it would be the natural way in a lion pride, but then Simba could never become king (or leader) of the Pride as well XD. Male lions doesn`t want to share their Pride with their sons.
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Nope, so you did wonderful job shaping a believable plot to enable her a different sire! Kudos!
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Are Uru's eyes closed or unfinished? o,o''
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Gawsh that Mheetu looks cute in the first panel. 
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something bad is gonna happen i can feel it
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uh-oh... poor... poor... ARGH! Nala's and Meethu's father T.T
Awesome still! But don't let him die! Save him, doctor!!!!
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*squeal* OMG OMG mheetu is soooo cute! If it isn't mheetu, sorry, but it LOOKS like him SO MUCH! *.*
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on no, oh nononono something bad is gonna happen to Upendo, I can feel it D:
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The question is, does he actually have the guts to kill another lion? BTW, you forgot to add pupils and irises to Uru's eyes in panel 1. They look kinda funny without them
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Get'em Scar kill Upendo! Sorry Upendo, but i prefer badass Scar.
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I think it wont be scar who gets attacked... O_O
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Uh-Oh! Nala's daddy shouldn't do that xD. It will end bad for him...
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I have a feeling Scar won't be the one to end up getting killed...
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