Comments: 104
KeyoshiStorm [2013-03-21 03:00:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm really not meaning to be rude.... but because of how horrible the writing is... I didn't understand anything...
Also, it would be a good idea to put a list of the characters so that people who are just now looking at this will know who each character is before reading a story.
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Siobhen26 In reply to KeyoshiStorm [2013-04-20 19:46:13 +0000 UTC]
I understood everything. Just sayin.
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KeyoshiStorm In reply to Siobhen26 [2013-04-21 00:23:32 +0000 UTC]
I posted that a while back. And it's just poor writing, that's all.
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Skullaaa In reply to KeyoshiStorm [2018-01-12 16:38:37 +0000 UTC]
English isn't his first language.
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pigeongirl65 [2013-01-19 09:41:03 +0000 UTC]
poor taka
so sad
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Whitecrow6553 [2012-10-28 00:07:51 +0000 UTC]
kawa looks alot like zira
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Chakatheprince [2012-10-24 23:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Poor Taka. It seems possible for it to happen though.
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falyn4god [2012-10-12 18:03:17 +0000 UTC]
Kawa is gorgeous!...even though she's a turd...
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PhantomPhan21 [2012-09-30 18:09:36 +0000 UTC]
Uru looks like she feels bad for Taka.
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ForFreeTime [2012-08-20 18:26:24 +0000 UTC]
i like the idea that mufasa look like his mother and scar look like his mother.
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TheImmortalRevenant [2012-08-12 10:10:05 +0000 UTC]
This part reminds me on a rp i'm doing with my friend
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Ruyc [2012-08-03 22:34:14 +0000 UTC]
It is just me or Mufasa looks more confused than sad?
This is also another great theory
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Grassy-Aggron [2012-07-25 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]
Hard to believe a mother would abandon her child, but it happens in life, sadly.
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cabevi [2012-07-14 13:46:35 +0000 UTC]
Kawa is truly beautiful.... but poor Taka!
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NewSea-ANother [2012-07-13 16:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Is Ahadi Mohatu's son in this theory?
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Akippuden [2012-07-12 16:51:11 +0000 UTC]
Ahadi look different,but i like him more like this
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Pinksneasel [2012-07-09 19:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Bad mother...
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charla316 [2012-07-09 17:03:15 +0000 UTC]
why does taka look bigger than mufasa ?
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Savu0211 In reply to charla316 [2012-07-09 18:33:56 +0000 UTC]
because he is cloder and Mufasa is more in the background
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Lord-Sithis [2012-07-09 05:57:34 +0000 UTC]
that would definitely cause some mental scaring. Poor boy
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UzuriMia [2012-07-09 00:23:24 +0000 UTC]
Werid because normally. There are no affairs in a pride XD
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fanofnaruto [2012-07-08 22:45:01 +0000 UTC]
uru and ahadi look so different than your design for them in the other comic xD
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TechouNoPenki [2012-07-08 19:20:55 +0000 UTC]
Kawa you bitch! Poor Taka....
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WeisseEdelweiss [2012-07-08 14:25:50 +0000 UTC]
Poor Uru..
Lovely fanart. : )
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Nichers [2012-07-08 11:05:26 +0000 UTC]
Savu, you could write soap-operas, you, know?? XD
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rebelwolfchris [2012-07-08 10:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow, Kawa looks just like him!
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Rissarockinroo [2012-07-08 04:30:30 +0000 UTC]
Ura looks like Kiara!
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ChineseFightinMuffin [2012-07-08 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]
I really love Kawa's design she's now one of my favourite characters by you Savu, great job and interesting theory I really really like it!!!
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sugar0o [2012-07-08 02:52:45 +0000 UTC]
o.o Ahadi looks so much different then before! but i like this. please let me know where are you getting the names from, not your OC's but those that seem to be canon?
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NttArts [2012-07-08 02:40:23 +0000 UTC]
that's so sad. Yeah Taka does look alot of his "mother"
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Katoracked [2012-07-08 01:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Kawa is such a beautiful lioness!
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elliesfunkymonkies [2012-07-08 01:05:02 +0000 UTC]
kawa is a beautiful lioness! would love to see more art involving her (hint hint)
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Rocky-Fuller [2012-07-07 23:58:10 +0000 UTC]
This theory would make way more sense since Scar and Mufasa clearly have barely any similarities from the movies except for the fact they're brothers. It can also explain where Scar got his bad side. This mum looks pretty evil to me. I really like this theory. Poor little Mufasa looks so confused
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animewolfgal [2012-07-07 22:19:48 +0000 UTC]
i think this alternative story goes really well with your story dark times, becaues this reminded me of the part were scar was taking to Mheetu he said that "His Parents loved THERE SON"
page 150
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LadyKalico [2012-07-07 22:02:16 +0000 UTC]
I feel so bad for Taka and Uru, but I am totally in love with this theory - it's one I've never heard of, and it's just wonderful!
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Lionsoulkopa [2012-07-07 21:23:20 +0000 UTC]
Kawa, nice. Blight in Swahili?
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