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Published: 2012-07-07 14:58:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 31651; Favourites: 614; Downloads: 0
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Description I gave Taka`s mother finally a name XD


Early in the morning Kawa stood in front of priderock and called Ahadi`s name. He should come out and take his son because she wasn`t willing to care for him anymore.

As Uru saw the face of his mate`s old love affair she felt a pain in her brest. It was not a secret that Ahadi had a love affair short before Mufasa was born and that the result was another cub. But the affair didn`t take for a long time and Ahadi turned back to his true love begging for forgiveness. Uru couldn`t give up her love, even as she learnt that Ahadi became father again. It was a hard time for both of them.

But since this moment Uru never has seen Kawa, neither her son. He was tiny and looks alot like his mother. The cub was crying for his mother as she left him without any words. Kawa only spoke to Ahadi that he never should try to contact her and from now on Taka was only his son, not hers anymore. If he didn`want him too, he could sent him to the desert and live his happy-life together with Uru and his firstborn.
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Comments: 104

KeyoshiStorm [2013-03-21 03:00:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm really not meaning to be rude.... but because of how horrible the writing is... I didn't understand anything...

Also, it would be a good idea to put a list of the characters so that people who are just now looking at this will know who each character is before reading a story.

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Siobhen26 In reply to KeyoshiStorm [2013-04-20 19:46:13 +0000 UTC]

I understood everything. Just sayin.

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KeyoshiStorm In reply to Siobhen26 [2013-04-21 00:23:32 +0000 UTC]

I posted that a while back. And it's just poor writing, that's all.

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Shadowplayz92 In reply to KeyoshiStorm [2023-11-05 21:59:50 +0000 UTC]

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Skullaaa In reply to KeyoshiStorm [2018-01-12 16:38:37 +0000 UTC]

English isn't his first language. 

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pigeongirl65 [2013-01-19 09:41:03 +0000 UTC]

poor taka
so sad

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OceanSunset22 [2012-11-08 21:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is soooo pretty. I just love her color

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Whitecrow6553 [2012-10-28 00:07:51 +0000 UTC]

kawa looks alot like zira

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Chakatheprince [2012-10-24 23:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Poor Taka. It seems possible for it to happen though.

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falyn4god [2012-10-12 18:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is gorgeous!...even though she's a turd...

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PhantomPhan21 [2012-09-30 18:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Uru looks like she feels bad for Taka.

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ForFreeTime [2012-08-20 18:26:24 +0000 UTC]

i like the idea that mufasa look like his mother and scar look like his mother.

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TheImmortalRevenant [2012-08-12 10:10:05 +0000 UTC]

This part reminds me on a rp i'm doing with my friend

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Ruyc [2012-08-03 22:34:14 +0000 UTC]

It is just me or Mufasa looks more confused than sad?
This is also another great theory

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jenniferthelioness23 [2012-07-27 06:06:54 +0000 UTC]

thats harsh nowonder why he became evil in theory

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Grassy-Aggron [2012-07-25 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Hard to believe a mother would abandon her child, but it happens in life, sadly.

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CahjesaalLesou-n [2012-07-18 15:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is so pretty.

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cabevi [2012-07-14 13:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is truly beautiful.... but poor Taka!

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MikachuSango [2012-07-14 03:04:31 +0000 UTC]

Awwww

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NewSea-ANother [2012-07-13 16:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Is Ahadi Mohatu's son in this theory?

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Akippuden [2012-07-12 16:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahadi look different,but i like him more like this

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Pinksneasel [2012-07-09 19:35:33 +0000 UTC]

Bad mother...

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charla316 [2012-07-09 17:03:15 +0000 UTC]

why does taka look bigger than mufasa ?

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Savu0211 In reply to charla316 [2012-07-09 18:33:56 +0000 UTC]

because he is cloder and Mufasa is more in the background

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roamingtigress [2012-07-09 07:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Poor lil' guy I like this theory.

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Lord-Sithis [2012-07-09 05:57:34 +0000 UTC]

that would definitely cause some mental scaring. Poor boy

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UzuriMia [2012-07-09 00:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Werid because normally. There are no affairs in a pride XD

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fanofnaruto [2012-07-08 22:45:01 +0000 UTC]

uru and ahadi look so different than your design for them in the other comic xD

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Flameshadow117 [2012-07-08 21:12:58 +0000 UTC]

This is a cute story! While I do prefer the designs of either Ahadi or Uru having the darker Scar-like features, I also like the explanation that Scar's mom was a rogue. It explains why Mufasa, Simba, and Kiara all have the light-colored pridelander look, and all of Scars (possible) children have the outlands-nose and darker coloring. Plus it easily explains his rotten attitude.

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TechouNoPenki [2012-07-08 19:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Kawa you bitch! Poor Taka....

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XThursdaysDoveX [2012-07-08 19:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is a gorgeous lion! Too bad she's a jerk.

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Cynderthedragon5768 [2012-07-08 19:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is pretty!

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Monymaii [2012-07-08 14:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Poor Taka

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WeisseEdelweiss [2012-07-08 14:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Poor Uru..

Lovely fanart. : )

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lillysart [2012-07-08 11:32:39 +0000 UTC]

I should say: pain in her chest not brest

keep up your work!

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Nichers [2012-07-08 11:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Savu, you could write soap-operas, you, know?? XD

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rebelwolfchris [2012-07-08 10:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Kawa looks just like him!

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Rissarockinroo [2012-07-08 04:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Ura looks like Kiara!

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ChineseFightinMuffin [2012-07-08 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]

I really love Kawa's design she's now one of my favourite characters by you Savu, great job and interesting theory I really really like it!!!

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sugar0o [2012-07-08 02:52:45 +0000 UTC]

o.o Ahadi looks so much different then before! but i like this. please let me know where are you getting the names from, not your OC's but those that seem to be canon?

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NttArts [2012-07-08 02:40:23 +0000 UTC]

that's so sad. Yeah Taka does look alot of his "mother"

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Katoracked [2012-07-08 01:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Kawa is such a beautiful lioness!

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elliesfunkymonkies [2012-07-08 01:05:02 +0000 UTC]

kawa is a beautiful lioness! would love to see more art involving her (hint hint)

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Mew44 [2012-07-08 00:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Your evil Kawa!

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Rocky-Fuller [2012-07-07 23:58:10 +0000 UTC]

This theory would make way more sense since Scar and Mufasa clearly have barely any similarities from the movies except for the fact they're brothers. It can also explain where Scar got his bad side. This mum looks pretty evil to me. I really like this theory. Poor little Mufasa looks so confused

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HelloWishbone [2012-07-07 23:19:48 +0000 UTC]

awww

but your uru is so much different to everyone else's. I like it!

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animewolfgal [2012-07-07 22:19:48 +0000 UTC]

i think this alternative story goes really well with your story dark times, becaues this reminded me of the part were scar was taking to Mheetu he said that "His Parents loved THERE SON"
page 150

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LadyKalico [2012-07-07 22:02:16 +0000 UTC]

I feel so bad for Taka and Uru, but I am totally in love with this theory - it's one I've never heard of, and it's just wonderful!

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Lionsoulkopa [2012-07-07 21:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Kawa, nice. Blight in Swahili?

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Savu0211 In reply to Lionsoulkopa [2012-07-07 21:51:10 +0000 UTC]

yes^^

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