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Published: 2011-03-09 02:21:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Oh-
We'll find the reason before we go.
We'll let our hearts burn in the after glow.
We'll let the houses burn to the ground
in decay.
En masse they'll find us in the streets,
tearing up the papers
underneath our dirty feet.
Oh but now
we're spreading paper-thin.
Guess we'll have to find our reasons to give in.
Oh!
We're fighting with the after-glow.
Oh!
I guess we'll burn it down...
Oh!
We're rumbling, tumbling like a gun.
And with the soldiers we will run...
And with the soldiers we will run...
Oh!
It seems like only yesterday,
you sat beside me with so many reasons
to, stay.
Oh!
It seems like only yesterday,
your heart had so many reasons,
to...

Oh!
We're burning in the afterglow.
Oh! I guess we'll burn it down...
Oh!
We're gonna burn it down...
(There goes love's pedestal and now we're back to square...one)
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Comments: 13

TheInvisibleImp [2011-03-11 13:04:48 +0000 UTC]

This feels more like professional song lyrics then a poem (then again, a song is a poem with a beat) Beautiful rendition of love in the afterglow ^^

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savvycoon In reply to TheInvisibleImp [2011-03-11 18:33:49 +0000 UTC]

<3 thank you for your critique! much appreciated!

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TheInvisibleImp In reply to savvycoon [2011-03-11 21:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear it ^_^

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savvycoon In reply to TheInvisibleImp [2011-03-11 23:47:07 +0000 UTC]

^^

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crazyninjapolerbear [2011-03-10 01:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Very nice

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savvycoon In reply to crazyninjapolerbear [2011-03-10 02:33:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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crazyninjapolerbear In reply to savvycoon [2011-03-10 22:29:59 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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ZoeZoe-Zombie [2011-03-09 03:03:48 +0000 UTC]

*Pedestal, but other than that, i really love it. (:

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savvycoon In reply to ZoeZoe-Zombie [2011-03-09 12:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Fixed! Thank you for pointing that out lol. and Thanks!

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ZoeZoe-Zombie In reply to savvycoon [2011-03-09 15:19:55 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! ^^'

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savvycoon In reply to ZoeZoe-Zombie [2011-03-09 22:02:24 +0000 UTC]

^^

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waxticket [2011-03-09 02:23:28 +0000 UTC]

i like it! its such a tough question isn't it...

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savvycoon In reply to waxticket [2011-03-09 02:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! and yes...that it is.

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