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Azsalyn [2012-10-18 18:03:43 +0000 UTC]

One minor correction to the description: Order is backwards on the naming. Left is Reyna (green kimono), middle is Emirasu (light blue kimono), right is Aislyn (black kimono). No worries though. :3

This looks absolutely awesome! I really love your designs for their outfits and the hairstyle changes for the festival. Excellent work! The setting is exactly what I had in mind, but even more vibrant and rendered exceptionally well. Before I go any further, let me just say I am 95% satisfied with the commission (you forgot Aislyn's facial scars, which are a pretty major part since they affect her on a psychological level. If you can edit those in, even if you keep them fairly subtle, then I would be 100% satisfied.) I will almost certainly be hiring you again when another idea springs to mind!

As for colors, I think they look fine. They look a little bright like it's daytime, but with that many fireworks in the sky, I think it's still alright.
The only other thing I'd comment on is that the fireworks look a little blurry/blocky in the full view when I download this, but it's not as noticeable at lower resolutions.

In closing, if I were to grade this, this would be an A! Very well done! I especially love Aislyn's kimono and Reyna's hair ornaments. Reyna is ridiculously cute, Emi looks very sexy, and I would just want to marry Aislyn on the spot if I saw her walking down the street like that. Keep up the great work!

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