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EHXKOR [2013-03-04 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]
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Oke hey- So I'm just thinking this definately deserves a critique, so lets go (andalsoitsbeenforeversincei'vewrittenoneohhohoh)~
First thing I want to point out is that I absolutely love your backgrounds, and even though this one is fairly simple, it still looks just so beautiful. I especially like how you did the tree and the leaves on that one branch that he's sitting on- I really feel that reflection really brought this picture to life.
Now moving on to the main part of the picture- the actual character, again, I love the way you do the hair on all your drawings; I find it so difficult to add any form of shape to hair (ie. curves, curls, etc.), with the highlights especially, and you obviously have more than enough skill to do that! The position of the way the person is actually sitting looks great as well. The one thing I have a problem with are his lower-legs; I'm not sure why, I just feel it doesnt quite look right (notlikeimtojudgeanythinglikehthatahaha). I'm just not quite sure where his ankles are, I guess.
I also have to say, amazing work on the heart he's holding as well. I love the blood that flows out of his hand, and the way that it flows down as well, I just feel that the "holding the heard in hand" thing isn't really tooo too original, because I've seen it tons of time, BUT- but the concept is definately something unique.
I can't wait to see more from you, Kyle ^^
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Neon-Panties [2013-03-04 02:52:45 +0000 UTC]
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WOO GUISE LOOK I'M FIRST |DDDD
I wanted to critique on this, because my eyes like popped when I saw this.
Kyle, this is absolutely amazing, like, honestly.
Amazing concept, the colours are just, wow. The shading, everything. It's perfect.
The lines look so neat and clear, and you've done them so well! His hair is very nice and detailed, and you've made it looks so awesome ouo You have an awesome job at anatomy and it's just brilliant!
Although, theres one thing that I don't really like, as amazing as it is the background seems very.. boring.
It's nice, it is, the concept and stuff of it, like it looks nice, but it doesn't really go well coloured with Tye, Like, the colours are good but it would be better if you lined it or something, otherwise it doesn't look the same.
Other then that, this is amazing!! Awesome Job Kyle! c:
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Shad0wFlight34 [2013-08-20 00:43:00 +0000 UTC]
0h my d0g!
This is s0 cute, I l0ve y0ur st0ry.
It's-
It's very cute.
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deifanlove [2013-08-12 05:31:08 +0000 UTC]
I just noticed that rainbow near his butt~
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CaptainCajsa [2013-06-20 09:02:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, your drawing style is really beautiful :3
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LindaFox [2013-04-22 00:56:04 +0000 UTC]
Adorably creepy.. I'd love this guy if I saw him IRL. <3
Love the way you did the background and the heart! Yes!
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ScaredPrince In reply to ShutterMama [2013-03-26 12:50:04 +0000 UTC]
thankyou! ;v;
It's alright, I've been trying to cope best I can; it's just frustrating because nobody seems to really seem to realize just how serious it is and that I need help. XD;
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ShutterMama In reply to ScaredPrince [2013-03-27 13:00:51 +0000 UTC]
I've been there, with different issues. It sucks when you can't get people to take you seriously. Especially when they think they are! If you ever need to talk, I'm only a phone call away. I promise to just listen, no judgement. (It just now occurs to me to make sure you now this is Alena. Not sure my name is actually on my thingy on here...) Love you ♥
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ScaredPrince In reply to ShutterMama [2013-03-27 13:29:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god I had no idea I just thought you were a random person I'd just dump feels on you--
But this subject isn't exactly easy to discus with my voice sing I'm not one to really vocalize what I think very well.
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maxwel1 [2013-03-18 07:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh good Lord that is the PERFECT premise for an excellent yaoi comic strip series. WoW I really hope you follow up on it because it sounds promising
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ScaredPrince In reply to maxwel1 [2013-03-18 14:12:02 +0000 UTC]
x'D Once I get out my lazy slump I'll most certainly give it a shot.
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maxwel1 In reply to ScaredPrince [2013-06-15 08:33:02 +0000 UTC]
Just reminding you about the comic strip. Just saying that since it's summer I will have alot of time to do stuff {not a very social person so will mostly laze around on computer} so if you want I could write the stories and send them to you to just draw a picture or two for each chapter.
You don't have to if you don't want to I'm just throwing this out there.{ Been planing on doing something for fanfiction.net maybe this.
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XXAnemia [2013-03-17 14:33:13 +0000 UTC]
adjfhdsf what a cutieeeeee! he can eat my sheep any day
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Akira-My-Baby [2013-03-04 16:30:47 +0000 UTC]
Assfgh I'd critique this but I just can't explain
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Dottea [2013-03-04 11:25:30 +0000 UTC]
I hope things are OK my bby, and this looks totally great- I like the concept for this bby hnnnngg <333 nice work
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LittleMissAlexius [2013-03-04 08:27:11 +0000 UTC]
some really nice background there and the body paints are awesome C:
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IAmDeprivedOfSleep [2013-03-04 05:59:41 +0000 UTC]
That tree branch, it has a face....
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Kon78 [2013-03-04 03:24:50 +0000 UTC]
This is totally ADORABLE!!!!!<3
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Rockerchick676 [2013-03-04 03:19:10 +0000 UTC]
C: I'm just amazed with this! First of all kind of weird but totally sweet with the sheep heart xD sowwie I couldn't stay for the whole livestream I tried but the my cold was like nah screw the beautiful art go take some meds and possibly sleep. <3
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neko-mancer [2013-03-04 03:03:26 +0000 UTC]
he has a cool background story
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thefrenchmannn [2013-03-04 02:26:43 +0000 UTC]
;-;... this. makees. me. sa.ddd
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debskyo [2013-03-04 02:23:25 +0000 UTC]
perfection
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Snake--Bites [2013-03-04 02:23:24 +0000 UTC]
asdfghj kyle how you do toes ; 7 ;
anyhoo, feel better kyle, if it's ever needed, it's ok to take a break from everything once and a while, but always know that you will always have someone to talk to okay babe? <33
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cloudyjupiter [2013-03-04 02:23:18 +0000 UTC]
!!! this turned out wonderful!!! i absolutely adore the way you color hair and fur- it makes it look so soft and nice.
im sorry i couldnt stay for the full duration of the live stream!!
wow i cannot get over how nice this picture is wtf the bruises look so nice everything looks so nice ;o;
and i hope you start to feel better. im really sorry about what happened its absolutely terrible. take as much time as you need for a break, hon. we dont mind at all!!!
warm regards!!!!
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ScaredPrince In reply to cloudyjupiter [2013-03-04 02:25:56 +0000 UTC]
dfhfdh Thankyou so much! q-q <3 It's alright that you couldn't stay the entire time,
I've been working on it for literally hours. XDD;;
but thankyou so much ;; <3
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cloudyjupiter In reply to ScaredPrince [2013-03-04 02:29:03 +0000 UTC]
hours well spent, it really did turn out great!!! it was a lot of fun to watch, your live streams are always so pleasant wow !!!
<3333
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singagainsoon [2013-03-04 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Amazing wow
Your art makes me happy okay
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Ramazikaa [2013-03-04 02:19:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, that turned out beautiful Kyle!
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xXFadingSunsetXx [2013-03-04 02:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Dat detail
Homg
Brb artgasm
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ThatMarsupicat [2013-03-04 02:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, I hope you feel better soon Kyle. <3
He reminds a little of a Forsworn from Skyrim, with the animal hood thing and the branch he's sitting on kinda looks like a forsworn staff //slapped
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