Lady-Vixtah [2018-11-06 02:11:51 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I love how your drawing shows Everest having some sort of flashback of happy memories during/before his death. It is really emotional when a character thinks about all the cats/people they've known. I also love the details in the shading, it gives the characters an implied feeling of fur and wet fur! The lighting is amazing, too! It gives the sense that he was once in the light(Life), but fell into darkness(death) Something you could improve is the water bubbles. The bubbles around Everest can be made lighter/more visible so on first glance, you can see he is drowning, or letting go of his last breaths of air.Another thing you could improve on is his pose, the straightness in his limbs make him look stiff/tense & not really dying. You can also think about his weight, his limbs are lighter than his body, but since one of his limbs is beneath his body, it could be drawn more bent/curved.Thank you for reading! I hope I helped!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
BiohazzardBonez [2018-11-07 15:48:20 +0000 UTC]
Denfini [2018-11-05 22:34:56 +0000 UTC]
YOUR ART IS SO DETAILED THAT IT’S KILLING ME!!Your so talented oml,, ❤️❤️
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ScarletMemories In reply to Denfini [2018-11-05 23:12:24 +0000 UTC]
Aahhh thank you so much wh??? That means a bunch <333