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Published: 2014-03-28 09:34:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 412; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 6
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Description I´m getting out of good titles for photos of cherries...but not of photos of cherries. Any advices for titles?
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AngelCruger [2014-05-23 13:53:55 +0000 UTC]

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Hi, First i would like to say that this is a very good picture of flowers.
Apart from the background blur, the actual flowers are in good focus.
The way you have captured the pure escence of spring by taking both the flowers and the buds. May i add that the bunch of flowers you have chosen are absolutely beautiful. Can i make another suggestion, next time you try and put more flowers into the light so they highlight some of the features on the petals and i would also think that this would be a great effect overall

Angel

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scarlette13 In reply to AngelCruger [2014-05-23 15:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your critique, I appreciate the time which you spend typing it. I´m glad that you like the photo and I´ll try to use your suggestion next time when I´ll be taking photo of similar flowers.

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Amanda-Bright [2014-05-10 22:36:14 +0000 UTC]

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I have to say, the overall image is beautiful. The pink adds wanted color, which is wonderful. With some of the buds being closed, it adds a sense of diversity, making sure it is not too repetitive. However, I feel the originality was lacking, as flowers are a popular item to photograph, however, the angle added some originality. Overall, the picture is beautiful, with a good color palette, and extremely pleasing to the eye. i encourage you to continue your art, as I am sure this is just one of your many fantastic pieces of art you have posted on deviantart.

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scarlette13 In reply to Amanda-Bright [2014-05-11 12:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for taking time to write this critique. I´m glad that you liked the photo and found so many positives about it. Also, thanks for encouragement, photographing is pleasant hobby for me, so I´ll surely keep making photos.

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McSmilesalot [2014-04-21 22:15:14 +0000 UTC]

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Overall, I feel that this picture is simply beautiful; I added it to my favorites.

Vision: The softness of the coloring is very delicate, yet it makes the flowers appear fragile. The detail of the sigmas, buds, and petals are brilliantly highlighted by the combination of the blurred background and coloring.

Originality: This isn't the first time I've seen a picture of this nature, so I can't say that it's an original idea, but other than that, I have no negative comments.

Technique: The blurred background brings out the best of the details in this piece; it made my eyes look immediately at the flowers in front. The lighting is also very well-done.

Impact: The picture captures the mood of the setting and reminds me of my childhood. I always loved the look and smell of Cherry Blossoms and other types of flowers. Often times, I would catch myself laying outside, observing them.

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kumapastrychef [2014-04-21 18:51:04 +0000 UTC]

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I'd have to say that this picture is the closest to perfect I've seen of any photography in a long time.


The angle is perfect for sure, it brings the overall look through the roof. It has a peaceful sensation, a good feeling of how the world is blooming again in it.

Also, the way you caught buds and blooms in the picture is perfect as well, even if there is no person in the picture, you've caught a particular flower as the focus here.

It's altogether gorgeous, the only problem here is that the background focus blur is a little too strong, but it's better than no focus blur at all.

In all, well done! Almost a five star picture!

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scarlette13 In reply to kumapastrychef [2014-04-22 05:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, your critique made me very happy. Of course, photos of flowers can´t be really original, but I´m glad that you liked it. I´ll think about the blurr next time when I´ll be making cherry photos. Once more, thank you.

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kumapastrychef In reply to scarlette13 [2014-04-22 17:59:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I'm glad I helped.

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Deadfish-SilentArmy [2014-03-28 14:00:59 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely!
Ok names let me give it a go... pink pompoms, a bunch of ruffles, pastel delicacies, petal blossoms... and now I'm stomped
Hope that helps!

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scarlette13 In reply to Deadfish-SilentArmy [2014-03-29 10:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment and advices you gave to me. It´s very helpful to me.

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Deadfish-SilentArmy In reply to scarlette13 [2014-03-29 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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