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Published: 2010-01-20 17:09:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1117; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 31
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ok i'm still working in the background for this but just incase i don't finish it in time i'll submitt this just in caseEDIT: OK I finished the background to this now
so now i'll write abit about it this is my second splash battle against
Aces Machamp and Karbutops vs Rakul Swampert {Jake} and Gardevoir {Nathanal} i took the advise that gave me and spend more time on the background and put more detail in the glowing attacks in this case hammer arm. i ask for some critique once again as i aim to improve
any pokemon moves
Jake is using Hammer arm
Machamp is using ice pump
Karbutops is floating
Nathanal is using physic
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Comments: 16
You're getting better really quickly, the background looks pretty good given we both know how hard it is to draw backgrounds in OCTs.
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because in OCT we're generally short on time to do epic backagrounds {and i hate doing backagrounds anyway}
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Ahem to that Scarlet, amen to that.
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thank you i'm trying to improve my digital work 
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you are improving a lot, really
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Oh wow, what an improvement! I can tell you took my advice because it clearly shows.
I love the angle you have on the Swampert. I'd say my advice for this time around is to look into line thickness to keep the viewer interested on the piece and give it some depth. Since Swampert is the closest to the viewer you can really thicken his lines so that you can separate him from the other action going on. Same with Machamp, but not as much as Swampert, while the two in the back seem fine as they are.
Once again keep an eye on when you clean up your colors, as there are still a bit to bleeding of colors outside the lines.
The lights you got coming off the hammer arm looks great though reflecting off Swampert. And of course, the background looks MUCH nicer!
Great job!
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thank you for the advise i'll make sure to incorparate it into my next splash battle
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No problem! Best of luck. ^^
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I was getting worried you weren't going to submit something
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i don't surrender easierly 
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thank you i'm trying to improve my colouring techinque using tablet
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