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Everyday I wake up (and it’s Sunday).Maybe then tomorrow will be Monday.
I want to be in a world where (I belong),
Squinting to see the Kingdom Come.
Maybe then we can see (ourselves).
Still life placed on the highest shelves.
When elsewhere in my (small) mind,
The stars picked their moment and shined.
Turning into something even (prettier),
Becoming something slightly wittier.
Then everything turns to cold (stone),
And we see things we’ve never known.
Maybe at home you’ll find (that heart),
Feeding it with your culinary art.
But now, it won’t be all (too long),
And I’ve gotten to seen the Kingdom Come.
So eat your words, I bet they taste (good).
You never knew you never knew you could.
Everyday I wake up it’s now (Monday).
Maybe yesterday was just another Sunday.
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Comments: 25
ShatteredProphecy [2007-04-05 14:04:06 +0000 UTC]
It's gooooood. D= Especially the first and last lines.
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sub911 [2007-03-24 23:10:00 +0000 UTC]
your poetry is amazing how do you come up with it lol
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Korova [2007-03-17 07:18:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, Scar. That was awesome writing. Very well done.
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Ookamiko [2007-03-13 04:53:02 +0000 UTC]
I love your writing style and formatting. Nice work!
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TimelessStar [2007-03-12 16:21:28 +0000 UTC]
I love poems in english Your poem is really good
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xMouseh [2007-03-11 15:49:24 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, absolutely lovely ^_^
You're a good poet, you really are. I love the style, and it flows very well. I'm impressed.
Well done!
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scorpioheart [2007-03-11 10:09:12 +0000 UTC]
Why you feel terrible?? o.O
Me likes the poem thingy, its really deep and meaningful. I cant figure out what this one means though -__-
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ScarWolf In reply to scorpioheart [2007-03-11 14:00:09 +0000 UTC]
.. you can enver figure out what I mean lol
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scorpioheart In reply to ScarWolf [2007-03-14 12:45:27 +0000 UTC]
I actually can
Iv been annotating poems for 2 years, you pick up on things lol
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x-hypo-x [2007-03-11 08:29:01 +0000 UTC]
It's... new fancy... style.. thing... whatever >:C
It's good, it's so meaningful.
I like the "Everyday I wake up it’s now Monday, maybe yesterday was just another Sunday."
Love it Scar <3
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SophiRandom [2007-03-10 21:53:13 +0000 UTC]
V ery good It's like..proffessional. o0; Awesome
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MorbidPoetry [2007-03-10 20:38:53 +0000 UTC]
I really like it.
It's..gosh..
I don't even know
the words to say about
it.X_X
But it's realllllly good.
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HungerPangs [2007-03-10 19:51:41 +0000 UTC]
i like the style and.. uh.. metaphor simile.. fancy.. writing words.. uh.. it's good! ;3
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