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Published: 2016-03-25 14:23:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1152; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Turned out really great IMO   
Watch the series it's really good Hentai Ouji to Warawani Neko aka  The "Hentai" Prince and the Stony Cat. I recently discovered the LN so it reminded me

Drawn using a normal 0.5 pencil and "inked" using Centropen Fineliner. Inspired by a scene in the manga.

Feedback on anything is, as always, appreciated!  
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Comments: 13

LadyChamomile [2016-08-08 06:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Great job! Really like the eyes and hair, it's just a beautiful style and I think you nailed it!
The foreshortening of the outstretched hand doesn't look quite right (I don't blame you, foreshortening is very difficult). Perhaps if the hand was drawn proportionally bigger to indicate that it is closer to the viewer, that might help. 

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to LadyChamomile [2016-08-08 21:08:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it really means a lot!
Thanks for the feedback too! Yeah it's really hard to get it right, and I think you might be right according the size. I'll do my best in the future to get it better!
(As someone who's not me, do you see that I tried to convey that it's his elbow that's showing under the hand? Not sure if I conveyed that to 100%)

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LadyChamomile In reply to ScatteredOsyx [2016-08-09 06:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! I did notice, and I think it was a good addition. I'm not good at foreshortening, so I do an image search to find examples as guidelines. Here's a few quick ones that I found were pretty good: img-cache.cdn.gaiaonline.com/0… and static.zerochan.net/Gaara.full… The larger porportions remove the feeling that the characters are deformed and missing limbs lol. Here's a good one where the palms are not facing the viewer, instead the fingers are reaching out 1.bp.blogspot.com/-1Jb1ARjAINs… Notice the shorted palm area and the enphasis on the fingers, which seem enlarged to me as well. I'm sure if you do a hand stock search here on DA you'll find great examples to copy/practice with. 

Anyways, that elbow detail was very good! I think it should be included when possible. Again great job! I'm just trying to add my 2 cents   

Edith! here's one that shows the importance of elbows!  pre13.deviantart.net/165c/th/p…

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to LadyChamomile [2016-08-12 18:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah great, really nice that it's not just me
Oh great I'll get to practicing as soon as possible, your examples really help!

Thanks a lot, I'm really happy that you help me out so much, your 2 cents are a great help and I appreciate that you take your time to find examples for me!

That last one was a really good addition too, I think elbows are really hard :3

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Miki-Ayala2 [2016-03-27 20:31:41 +0000 UTC]

dang it looks super neat and the lines are so clean and just...omg  

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to Miki-Ayala2 [2016-03-27 20:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh stop it you  , thank you!

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satansvacuumcleaner [2016-03-25 20:13:13 +0000 UTC]

really clean and neat lineart! it looks great!!       

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to satansvacuumcleaner [2016-03-25 21:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dionna2018 [2016-03-25 16:57:03 +0000 UTC]

that's awesome 

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to Dionna2018 [2016-03-25 21:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Dionna2018 In reply to ScatteredOsyx [2016-03-26 17:02:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem 

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Madokakaneme [2016-03-25 14:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Super good

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ScatteredOsyx In reply to Madokakaneme [2016-03-25 14:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it means a lot!

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