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Dianamisu [2016-06-16 20:22:25 +0000 UTC]

hello I am coming from the ICT of with the tag word "weapon"
the choice for this picture is more or less obvious I think! The gun aka weapon caught my eye!

i will start with pointing out things I like before going to the things to improve~

Firstly: the composition!
It is really simple central composition, but in this case it works really well and nothing more complicated is needed! It manages to show off both of the original characters really well as well as the canon one!

secondly: your work with the details on characters.
Of course I can't praise you for designing the characters, but you have portrayed them really well! It seems like no detail was forgotten! Even if there was, it doesn't seem important or necessary! You have also managed to make the robot characters seemingly alike, but highly different at the same time! and I adore that idea!

Thirdly: the expressions:
those really show off the mood of the drawing! and even the metal faces seem to have personality and expression and I am well aware that it's hard to achieve!

So the improvement part~

the main thing I have noticed not only in this picture, but trough all of the gallery. It's the fact that your work lacks "color". Everything seems to be in one tone. the only exception would be the female character's hair. That's the only thing that's darker! But right now it seems that her face, jacket, boots and the metal of gun and robots are in the same shade thus - same color.
to avoid this I'd suggest you to start off with placing the base shades before you would start to shade! in this way you would make sure the picture has all different shades, all different values! It will create greater dept of your picture and make it look more life like! only when you are happy with the tonality of  the whole peace, you would start to adding shades and lights! but be careful to not overdo any of those and thus killing the tonality you previously created!

Now your turn to comment on Tuntalm 's gallery, with the tag word "grip". Good luck !

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MimiChair [2016-05-12 15:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm here from the ICT and my tag word was: ''Warrior''
I choose this one because the characters in this drawing remind me of warriors

The characters are very well drawn they look very badass, I can see you put a lot of care into the details. I especially love the weapon ''Lee'' is holding, I can see that you know how a weapon is put together. It certainly shares the atmosphere of the original. 
The shading on Lee's jacked looks great, the high contrast of the shades make it look really 3-dimensional. It would be great to apply more of that high contrasted shadow to the characters in armor, just like in the original has the armored characters in high contrast. 
The shading on Lee's legs make her legs look a bit like metal tubes rather than skin. probably because the shade on her leg is very dark while the highlight is super light. Of course it's great that you use high contrast in her leg like in the original but it would work better if her leg shading had a lighter shade than the shading in her socks.


Hopefully my comment was any use ><
I trouble telling what I wanted to tell because I wasn't sure how to describe them in English  

Anyawy its now your turn to comment on Tuntalm 's gallery with the tagword: Portrait

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BlockMechanics [2016-04-20 22:09:53 +0000 UTC]

"Watch this video and learn from it."

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MOxC [2016-04-20 16:13:06 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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