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bubblewrap-pancakes [2012-07-30 20:29:15 +0000 UTC]

That looks awesome I especially like the fire And I agree with ~BR0DE0 , you really should submit this to more groups, there's no point having good artwork lying around in your gallery with nobody seeing it

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BR0DE0 [2012-07-30 19:22:05 +0000 UTC]

First of all, before I start, I must say that you are a great and deserve more watchers and favorites. I also see that this is not featured in any groups. Groups are you ticket to fame. Go to my sprites and join every group that you find that my Fakemon are featured in. They'll all let you in...
Then submit ALL of your Pokemon to those groups. YOu'll have fans before you know it.

The only thing I really notice that is off is the wings.
There really should only be 1 of those line suggesting a fold, so you should get rid of the ones on the left and right, and keep the middle one. Also The line should be darker than the color around it. It should be the colored outline color.
As for the other wing, expose it a little more, wings look great when sprited well, and once you change the one, it will look great. Things you sprite great should be exposed more to make the overall sprite look better.
The fire on the tail is excellent. You've got the chimchar style down pat.
The fire on the head I'm kind of iffy on. Try making some kind of tuff of fur around the flame on the head so It looks like it's coming out of the head, instead of the head just being on fire.

That's all I can find, but I'm not so sure that fire would show up in the shadows on the ground L('u'L)

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