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goldenpuon [2011-01-08 02:03:11 +0000 UTC]

If only Sid had got in the middle of it a bit more to solve the confrontation between Diego and Manny to talk this point in a calm manner. From the expression on his face, he is the only one who seems calm/not upset. Manny does have a point about Diego betrayed his family and got him and Sid involved but he seems quite riled up after getting the necklace. (Who wouldn't be if it was made from a deceased love one?) However, once Diego decided to spare the baby and hs friends, he didn't have much choice. I hope that didn't sound too critical. I seem to like analyzing various points in stories/movies.

Interesting twist in the plot. Nice emotional bit here. Poor Sid is speechless and caught in the middle.

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Scottvisnjic In reply to goldenpuon [2011-01-08 14:59:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your clean comment,
I know this twist not naturally...

I wonder if you see Diego feel guilt for his betray in any sequel movie?
I never see any sequel, but I guess he didn't,
and even talk about that.

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goldenpuon In reply to Scottvisnjic [2011-01-13 00:41:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

I think he does feel bad but does not mention it. He seems to get less dialogue/involvement in the plot in the sequels.

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Scottvisnjic In reply to goldenpuon [2011-01-13 03:28:08 +0000 UTC]

I see

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Agent-DieGo [2010-08-02 10:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Interesting way.... Very....

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Scottvisnjic In reply to Agent-DieGo [2010-08-02 13:47:43 +0000 UTC]

oh....who know Manny so Angry That he find he killed Diego's own brother...
It's a very terrible feeling that you find you killed your friend's brother....


have you read all my novel yet?

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Agent-DieGo In reply to Scottvisnjic [2010-08-02 16:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Yep, all of it

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Scottvisnjic In reply to Agent-DieGo [2010-08-03 02:18:22 +0000 UTC]

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karabaja [2010-07-04 21:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw, so intense!!! Very emotional, this piece- great, touching job!

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Scottvisnjic In reply to karabaja [2010-07-05 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]

Diego become a really villain in my story

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ekoi1995 [2010-06-29 14:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Manny has a tough heart eh...It's just already happened and it's time to forgive and forget...Manny is such a meanie since the first time i see him...

I wonder why, Soto's alive, someday they'll meet Manny face to face...

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Scottvisnjic In reply to ekoi1995 [2010-06-29 14:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Manny is very kindly...

at that moment, they don't know if Soto alive...
and yes...they will face to face someday...

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ekoi1995 In reply to Scottvisnjic [2010-06-29 14:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Haha!! I thought so!

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VigBrastle [2010-06-27 01:53:09 +0000 UTC]

wow, Manny sure shows he is angry here, Good point too Diego could have just not led them to half peak and avoided the whole confrontation! And Soto would not have been killed.

At least now Diego is showing signs of being upset about Soto's death, which he sure didn't in the movie.

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Scottvisnjic In reply to VigBrastle [2010-06-27 06:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Yah, they was can avoided whole confrontation...

in my own version, of coures Diego was very guilt...
that never show in the movie....

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