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SDevilHeart — D.O.R. Ch. 2 Pg 7
Published: 2009-05-08 13:33:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1899; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 14
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definatley not a girly girlsorry that i haven't upload D.O.R. in awhile. i've been busy lately. so to make it up to you guys i'm uploading 2 pages in one day
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remember to look out for spelling errors and i'll make you one of these~
[link] -will correct spelling errors until May 13-
characters belong to these people
-in the order to how they appeared-
IMAGINE EVERYONE IN THIS STORY AS A HUMAN [link]
Next Page: [link]
Previous Page: [link]
Cover 2: [link]
done in photoshop
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Comments: 46
Meant* D: In the third panel! I just saw it :c I've been reading this comic, I like it ^^
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ah sorry i'm not doin spellin error gifts for this page anymore although someone pointed that out befor but i guess i forgot to change it
and thank you ^^
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It's alright, wasn't really expectin' to get rewarded, but I noticed it X3 and you're welcome ^^
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LOL it would be funny if a kid was like, "Momee... shes angry.." and she was like DAMN RIGHT I AM LOL
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anger issues is scary O_o. :3
btw, shouldn't "What's a ass?" be "What's an ass?"
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yeah but i tried to make it sound like a little kid was talking
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never mind n_n ;. Btw, nice page :3
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YES!!!! I'm so glad u put in the next pg!!! lol i love what all the kids are asking in the background!!! u are way AWESOME SD!!!
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Hey, you're back!!! Woot!
Shouldn't there be a ? after "Hey, weren't we doing the same exact a little while ago"?
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aw crap your right
k what character shall i do?
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Nah, you don't have to do a character for me, I'm just doing what I'm good at: checking for spelling and grammar errors. Just get Dusk done whenever you can and I'll be happy.
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ok it's about halfway done already
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" Ment it with love. " Never heard that before. xD
lol," Don't give me any of that 
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In the second panel, you misspelled "ment". It's supposed to be "meant"
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sorry dude someone got it already
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i think you should have used realise in this situation :3
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actually that's how the British spell it
American English - British English
Curb - Kerb
Color - Colour
Realize - Realise
Criticize - Criticize
Dreamed - Dreamt
Spilled - Spilt
Spoiled - Spoilt
Smelled - Smelt
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awww xD
im using a mix of them i think xD
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im not sure since both is correct xD
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Whoooa, SD might wanna take the screaming level down a bit.
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when you said "sd try to keep it g rated please" you do need a comma between "sd" and "try"
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yeah your right
k what character shall i do?
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Cooool :3
Shouldn't it be "I'm talking to you guys, too"? ^-^;
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mmm yeah i think so.
k what character shall i do
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Yay ^o^ Ok can you do my fursona? [link]
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holy crap how did i miss that. what a stupid mistake.
ok, what character shall i do?
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Ahh, its easy to do 
Uhm. Can you do Wishtheif please? (The Cat OC on here) [link] if that pictures too hard, as it's side on, I can always draw you another =O. But her other ear is just like the one in view, same with her eyes. And her hat kinda settles like Link's hat, but leaning down more. xP
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k will do. that picture is fine
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should it be "what's -an- ass"? :3
.. and they manage to pronounce the "heart" smilie XD
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i actually noticed that one. but i was having little kids say it so i kinda kept it that way to make it seem like kids were actually speaking
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