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Sdwaggy — In The Army 7
Published: 2005-07-11 14:42:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 3467; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 114
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Part 7The left frames look like dirt... The right frames are experiments with camera angles. Top right looks like crap. Bottom right sort of looks good but something about it really bugs me...
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All that is bad about that 1st panel is the abuse of an ugly word (words that are "good" in the strictest sense yet can be treated as "bad" if used incorrectly in a certain way). And should there be a semicolon between "down there" and "we each"?
But any way, how is he going to pop those baloons withut hurting himself?
But enough negative critique; I like the camera angles of the 2nd and 4th panels, and there is nothing wrong with the picture of the 1st panel for me. However, I think that the thing that bugs you about the 4th panel might be eithet the stomach, the chest, or that curve at the end of his mouth below his eye.
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Let's hope we see more of these IN the Army series!
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