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Plagey In reply to seagaull [2016-11-29 19:46:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! <3
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Heichukar [2016-11-23 08:08:57 +0000 UTC]
Finally i can comment ;-;
AAAHH where to start! I really love the improvement on anatomy and wings. Especially Zeus's closed wing, i see alot improvement there. You have improved with the pattern/shape of the secondaries and how they fold on top of the primaries. There is little things to fix with it, but this is already MUCH better! I'm so proud of you.
Now im brave and gonna give some little constructive criticism. I mean I really really like this piece here. but only one thing caughts my attention a bit and it's the fact that Zeus is walking towards the end of the "canvas" and he's looking straight there and there is sooo little space for the sight. It's common "rule" that the eyesight should have some space. It's not big deal, but just to let you know, it's just more visually appealing when you can see somewhat where and what's he's looking at. but hey, maybe it's the point, we just cant see what he does and we can't know what he's up to and where's he off to.
But to move on. I really like the shades here. I see you have learned the magical use of photoshop for doing the lights! It's what I also do, because it's great and it helps alot :3
I gotta love the fact that the light comes from behind and so the shades are in the "middle" of the characters and the edges are more lighty which it should be. and Teofila's wings have the effect of light coming behind the feathers making them more light, it's great detail and touch.
I like your way of making grass, it's not the one and same old photoshop brush that everyone uses xD I admit i used to use it when I was younger. I still use it for effects, but not too much as grass. Your grass has shades and it makes it more lively.
I like the detailed light and shade work on the chain too. The chain works great and you nailed all the lights on the different parts ^v^
This sizedifference is my favorite thing! I reaaally love characters with significant sizedifference! Zeus being the bad one and small one is even more amazing! <3
To me it appears like Zeus is going towards death and doom, That's why Teofila is so worried and also the dead trees behind him kinda reminds me of death and all. While Teofila's side has lots of grass and therefore more life ^^ Apparently you said it on the description too XD but I promise, i thought this myself, so i can clearly tell that you picture tells story very well!
This is really awesome drawing, I really like the purple shades and the symbolism and ahh the characters. YOu really did awsomew work here I'm really proud of you! <3
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seagaull In reply to Heichukar [2016-11-23 11:41:11 +0000 UTC]
wahhh this is perhaps the most beautiful comment i've ever received like ever. I just woke up and this already made my morning oh my. I needed the criticism and it wasn't in a way that totally destroyed the piece lol. XD I would love to say more but your points are so point on i'm speechless
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Heichukar In reply to seagaull [2016-11-23 11:48:03 +0000 UTC]
im so glad you liked it! ^^
You're welcome <3
This piece needed decent comment in my opinion, it's really great work and shows how far you're with your art :3 <3
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SorenPenguin [2016-11-22 08:39:05 +0000 UTC]
Certainly a great deal of improvement from the original! Gosh, I love those colours you used for the background/atmosphere xvx
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seagaull In reply to SorenPenguin [2016-11-22 11:45:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, glad you noticed those extra details this drawing was a pain but it was fun to draw
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Pyefeather [2016-11-21 16:10:10 +0000 UTC]
This is a lot of improvement! It's amazing too; the chain looks very realistic and so does the background!
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