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deviantXTYX98 [2015-05-20 23:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Not to mention pedophilia.
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AlexieUtopie [2014-06-01 14:58:22 +0000 UTC]
I think I prefer this Bella than the movie's one ! And her last sentence... Brilliant !
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Obeliskgirljohanny [2014-02-21 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]
augh....
bella look so groady
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SlackEye [2013-12-16 16:20:23 +0000 UTC]
I just now found this and was immediately reminded of the parody by multi-banned super-bizarro author Shawn Wunjo, who describes his "Ass" as "the tale of one young woman's [hosed] up love forΒ a corpseΒ and aΒ furry. Yeah, [poo poo] is that bad."
(Hi! I'm the guy from Chambersburg who drove up to Carlisle to pick up his We Want Shiny Things package from Megan. If she didn't mention me, shame on her! Shame, I say!)
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KazeGirl21 [2013-11-11 02:43:43 +0000 UTC]
EXACTLY! this was what I was thinking about the plot! YESSSS!
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Radlok [2013-02-25 20:54:08 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT! Can I please, please, please post this on facebook? I sorta collect reasons why Twilight has problems. From comparing Bella to Hermione, to the overuse of the word "smolder".
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secondlina In reply to Radlok [2013-02-26 03:01:44 +0000 UTC]
Heh, i'd rather not. This picture has gotten used on facebook before, and the next day, I got a bunch of hate-mail. It wasn't very pleasant.
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Radlok In reply to secondlina [2013-03-01 12:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to hear about the hate mail, I'll respect your request, but still gonna save it for my collection.
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secondlina In reply to Radlok [2013-03-01 16:55:48 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! Thanks for being so nice!
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Radlok In reply to Radlok [2013-02-25 23:28:22 +0000 UTC]
Also, on the topic of bad writing, where was her editor? David Eddings, writer of the "Belgariad","Malloreon" and other fantasy series, said that the best way to know if something [that you've written] sounds right, is to say it, or have someone else say it, out loud.
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Radlok In reply to Radlok [2013-02-25 21:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Also, on the topic of bad writing, where was her editor? David Eddings, writer of the "Belgariad","Malloreon" and other fantasy series, said that the best way to know if something [that you've written] sounds right, is to say it, or have someone else say it, out loud.
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Radlok In reply to Radlok [2013-02-25 21:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Also, on the topic of bad writing, where was her editor? David Eddings, writer of the "Belgariad","Malloreon" and other fantasy series, said that the best way to know if something [that you've written] sounds right, is to say it, or have someone else say it, out loud.
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brensey [2012-11-15 20:55:11 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe I've never seen this before. This is amazing.
I'm in the same spot of having friends who like the Twilight series and having to hold my tongue when they gush about it. Thankfully, none of them ever dragged me to one of the movies.
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secondlina In reply to brensey [2012-11-16 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I still think it had the potential to be something really good. It's too bad the writer decided to go for a weak role model lead instead.
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DotheUMBRIDGESMASH [2012-11-13 11:35:55 +0000 UTC]
I disliked the many time that Bella referred to Edward as 'Greek/a Greek God'... the last Greeks I saw were plump, hairy (especially the women), short and fond of pinching my cheeks and babbling on about how sore their stomachs were.
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QuickStarBlossom [2012-09-07 06:05:10 +0000 UTC]
I remember coming across this awhile back. Not looking at it again I can see the similar drawing style from Namesake I feel like an idiot I am not sure how I miss that.
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secondlina In reply to QuickStarBlossom [2012-09-07 11:52:36 +0000 UTC]
It's a pretty old drawing though, so it's normal the style isn't obvious.
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secondlina In reply to Spirallee [2012-06-02 22:41:05 +0000 UTC]
Just making things less painful for everyone.
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papoilademare [2012-02-17 16:10:42 +0000 UTC]
bella, i agree.
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cyang908 [2012-02-12 04:41:44 +0000 UTC]
lol XD
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AMUTOKISSES [2011-10-13 01:37:28 +0000 UTC]
i've saw the movies, i liked them, though i'm not obsessed, this is so funny XD
by the way, i love the way you draw.
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AMUTOKISSES In reply to secondlina [2011-10-13 22:39:38 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome, and i strated to read your comic yesterday, i like it's good.
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RavenBaubles [2011-08-15 20:01:15 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful.
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Popinns [2011-08-10 02:48:37 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! I can definitely agree with you and I too have been dragged by friends to see the movies. (sigh)
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secondlina In reply to gstrout [2011-08-05 14:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe, thanks!
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secondlina In reply to madamenanas [2011-07-18 00:16:50 +0000 UTC]
It's a bit sad because honestly, with minimal effort this could have been a great AND popular book and not just a popular one that is mediocre...
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madamenanas In reply to secondlina [2011-07-18 05:01:25 +0000 UTC]
I completely agree with you about that too.
The story line is interesting, and like you said, could have been great.
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TheDrawingQueen14 [2011-06-22 01:09:11 +0000 UTC]
Haha I never thought of it as necrophilia and bestiality! xDDDD
I udnerstand what you mean about the whole love-hate thing though. I read the first book when I was in 7th grade and I loved it. But then I went to re-read it a few years ago, and I was like, " What? Why the hell did I like this? This thing sucks!"
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ChaliceGarden [2011-06-04 20:53:17 +0000 UTC]
XD omg this is hilarious
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secondlina In reply to ChaliceGarden [2011-06-05 02:24:57 +0000 UTC]
If Bella had a spine, she would gotten herself out of the dead-end plot.
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sexy-little-vorer [2011-03-27 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]
beastyality forever bitch!
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stevemacqwark [2011-03-20 23:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Like Bella even has a brain.
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