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Published: 2009-07-16 02:59:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3372; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 29
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This page is really bad. The background colors started running out and I did four rows per page. It turned out so bad that I had to draw three extra panels today to make it look better. It still doesn't look great, but it is a huge improvement from what it used to look like. The next page has better coloring.
In the second to last panel Azula tries to use her fire blast.
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WOWOOWWOWWW! Your comics are getting better and better!!!! X3! The excitement and action-packed panels of awesome drawings, I personally love the 3rd panel the best, great foreshortening and her face looks awesomely colored 
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Thanks! The third panel is one of the panels I added in to make things clearer/less boring.
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Aha well third panel just adds to the suspense 
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beautiful drawings. you really improved the way you draw people and forshortening( remember the baseballbat ^^?)
anyway there is a little problem.. that i had to understand the order of your comic.. its to wild, there has to be more structure i think.
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Thanks <3
Do you mean the layout of the panels or just that the panels don't transitions well and I might need to draw more in between scenes?
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its a mix i guess. at the end i dont know whats happening where is the fireblast and whats happening on the last panel? why do they thow the spairs in a way she can climb somehwere on a roof? with a forest onto it?
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I see what you mean. The whole roof/forest confusion is because it's poorly colored. She's supposed to be climbing to the top of the wall and looking down on her surroundings.
However I could have made the spears thing clearer by adding more detailing panels.
There's no fireblast, she was attempting to firebend at the oncoming spears but she got struck with one and knocked down. I'm not sure how I could have made this last part clearer though.
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I think the question was more like is she able to firebend, did Aang remove her ability and she forgot she can't do it anymore?
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I've read all your pages up till now, I'm really digging where this is going. You're very pessimistic about the artwork, but I think it's much better than most fancomics I've seen. And keeping up the practice can only make your artwork better. ;D
Please continue with it! I'm really interested to see what's going to happen next, and I really like all the details you put in (like the weird winged newt-thing. That's such an Avatar animal. XD)
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Thank you! I'm doing this comic to improve my drawing and coloring, so hopefully I'll improve quickly.
The animal was fun to add into the story, pretty much the only thing in Avatar that isn't a hybrid are the fish, frogs, and Basco.
Thanks for your words of encouragement!
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Haha!Your avatar comics are freakin awesome
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Thanks! Honestly, I'm not excited, because most of the recent adaptations of everything have sucked, and the casting for this is kind of ...unsatisfactory. I think I would watch it if Azula turned out to be Indian, just for the lol factor.
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LOL she probably is XD' I heard the entire fire nation is Indian. It most likely will be a horrible movie but still I wanna see it just for laughs!
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