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ChessWatergrass [2015-08-07 20:38:32 +0000 UTC]
holy sheet that was amazing when he said "Be mine..." That really got me oh my god I am blushing even if I write smut this is beauty and its full of passion and I can't breAThe
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KagomeKirigiri [2015-01-08 02:20:09 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful. I...am speechless. THANK YOU SO MUCH.
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feathery-blue-otaku [2014-11-11 03:09:33 +0000 UTC]
“That isn’t half bad. You almost taste as good as a mackerel.”
D'AWWWWWWW
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BloodCoveredInRain [2014-11-09 23:21:45 +0000 UTC]
Actually, as an American, the translation was better than some of the people that write in english that are from America. So it was really good for that matter! And great one-shot, by the way ^.^
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BloodCoveredInRain In reply to Sekata [2014-11-10 01:39:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that sounds pretty cool! If you need me to, I can do a final proofread to make sure all the grammar and spelling is fine? Just an offer, I don't have to if you don't want me to.
Yes! I understand completely. Especially short ones, I mean, come ON people, get with the program! Use your better sense pf judgement maybe?!
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BloodCoveredInRain In reply to Sekata [2014-11-10 20:35:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I understand. It's no problem, I'm not as much of a writer as I am a proofreader.
I don't mind, I really only take a couple a minutes on homework and notes, so I won't mind, any time you need me, just ask!
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SnakeCharmerHime [2014-11-09 18:59:48 +0000 UTC]
Hey what do you say about me here? *tries to punch you* Better be~ XDDD
But yes if some of the sentence structurs suck or so...blame me I did it! XDD
But that side I hope~ you enjoy Haruka's chapter!
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Sekata In reply to SnakeCharmerHime [2014-11-09 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]
I said nothing at all!
I.. Nagisa logged into my account
and wrote all the bad stuff about you!
I swear!
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SnakeCharmerHime In reply to Sekata [2014-11-09 19:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm....really?
Well...then I will believe that, because I know you're honest! XDD
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Sekata In reply to SnakeCharmerHime [2014-11-09 19:15:09 +0000 UTC]
Phew.
Saved.
Nagisa: Well Mina-chan, you have some interesting pictures .. *Browses her folders*
Mina: WAIT WHAT? NO DON'T LOOK IN..
Nagisa: o.O Why are there naked Makoto, Jellal, Giotto and Ludger..?
Mina: <.< For.. studies.. on the male body..
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SnakeCharmerHime In reply to Sekata [2014-11-09 19:33:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes you have saved yourself!
Me: Woh...Nagisa, what did you find there?
Jellal, Giotto:...
Makoto: W-What?
Me: That must be some interesting~ studies then!
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Sekata In reply to SnakeCharmerHime [2014-11-09 19:38:25 +0000 UTC]
Me: << *deletes the folders* There is nothing to see!
Nagisa: Hey! That was quite interesting.. Do you have naked pictures of yourself and Lina-chan too?
Me: No.
Sting: For Lina-chan you have to look on Rogues Laptop..
Rei: And for Mina-chan, you should check Makotos Smartphone..
Makoto: WHAT? NO! Rin sent them to me!!
Me: RIN HAVE NAKED PICTURES OF ME?!
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SnakeCharmerHime In reply to Sekata [2014-11-09 20:02:53 +0000 UTC]
Me: That was quick!
Giotto: I maybe wanted to look at them, what you collected of me...
Jellal: Sadly we can't anymore!
Rogue: That's ri...Wait...What? Sting?! Why did you say that?!
Me: Ah...*blush~*...That was unexpected...
Frosch: Fro thinks so too~!
Rin: THAT'S ALL A LIE...I don't have any photos of Mina-chan *tries to hide them*
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