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Selkirk — cvx page 2...it still exists
Published: 2010-01-28 02:45:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 828; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 45
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ok so was rather busy today pencilling page two of my comic vine collaboration...cvx! page 1 is here: [link] seemingly from start to finish problems arose...the struggle is ongoing
. at any rate i did have fun drawing storm.various copyrights exist-
predator x copyright marvel comics
storm copyright marvel comics
monica martinez copyright
orin copyright ithinkitwasyou
from character creation thread here: [link]
from a script also by
layouts by my friend
page breakdown:
Page 3 – Monica’s Dream(s) (6 Panels)
Panel 1: Tight shot on Monica’s face, still struggling
Panel 2: Orin is covering Storm behind him, as he’s about to enter into battle with the Predator X.
Panel 3: Shot of only Monica’s shut eye
Panel 4: Orin is dead in Storm’s arms
Panel 5: Still in the dream, a collage of Gork, Noah, Jonah, Salome, and Sheeren being killed by Predators
Panel 6: Shot of only Monica’s eye but now open.
notes
anel five is now going to be splash page for page 3 
.further notes-added second panel for flow
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thanks so much 
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Awesome work! The nose seems slightly too big in panel one though...but great work overall!!
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thanks much bro...yep i think your right about the nose there-was kind of guessing and hoping i could get that pose/panel to work. panel 3 is also proving problematic-great practice however
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I like panel 3....keep it up man!
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most definitely...sharpening pencils as we speak(type?)
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so sorry I didn't comment on this when you first posted it Sel.
I was out of Town, and Just have been really busy lately.
But this is amazing!
I got the Inks posted just now BTW.
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oh np bro...been catching up on things myself-much thanks for kind words as always. just caught your inks...look great. also layouts have proven to be quite a help...
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thanks so much...inking really isn't in my toolbox just yet. so its just pencils for now
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thanks so much
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I wasn't talking about the panels, but about their PLACEMENT in the page ...
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true enough...after hearing about it on outcast forums and from commenters in here i mixed it up a bit-still to come is page with a borderless panel
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yep...really a nice visual trick...seems like it would work best on big face maybe profile-or full figure scene outdoors. definitely worth experimenting with
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I've also seen panels, where the limits were the drawing itself.
For instance, you have a big face on the one top left quarter, so the lines of the face on it's right are the limits to the next panel. See what I mean ?
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yeah these are great visually...really going to try to incorporate more of these styles in future pages. thumbing through manga witchblade...(for artistic reasons only
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oh the sacrifice of the artist...looking at page after page of scantily clad manga babes 
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thanks so much bro...really having a blast with these pages using the x-book chars and villains.
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My friend, let me tell you your struggle is well paid off ...this is awesome!!! I love how you capture expressions
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thanks so much 
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better him than storm
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overall looks great. panels 3 to 5 have me a little lost.
in panel 3 orin is alive, panel 5 he's dead. what happened? raises alot of questions.
kinda jumps from one event to another with no explaination.
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thanks so much...had some difficulty going panel to panel with this one. but at any rate it's a dream sequence...definitely would want a letterer with just some text boxes to help things along
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much thanks bro...there is a preceding page here: [link] . frankly happier with the other page 
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AMAZING!
Although I am thinking that maybe this page gets moved to page 3 and the splash page could be page 2...
You continue to amaze me!
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aww thanks so much 
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