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Sempraseverus — RedRemorse XII

Published: 2009-07-19 18:22:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1944; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 29
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Description Red Remorse
Pg Twelve
Rampant Redeux




“Avada Kedavra….”



He screamed it out loud, again, as he had so many times before…

“I… I cannot endure this….” His moans and broken speech filled the dim room.


He shrieked into the dawn air… Albus tried to sooth this reoccurred bout without much success… The Nightmare was deeply seated in Severus’ subconscious.

The emotion cruel and raw… and it would not abate…


“I am sorry Severus… regrettably, I see my mistake now… I should never have had subjected you to this… You suffer what no Wizard should have to…
And now sadly... I can do nothing to ease your anguish…”


Severus twisted and turned in the linen, He fought and waved his long arms against Albus who tried to keep him still…


“Albus… W- Why did you make me do this…”


“Oh Severus… please forgive me…”


“What… Forgive you?…” His face contorted with ferocious pain… He writhed in his tortured state…


“Forgive you… How can I forgive you… when I cannot forgive myself, you mad bastard…”


Poppy Pomfrey rushed into the dark room… She had heard the wild shrieks and the mad babbling… Severus continued his conversation for another moment before

his reverie subsided… He stilled finally, quieted and slowly began to breath with ease… He was a damp motionless black form in the tangle of the bedding…

Poppy sighed… wishing only that Albus could be here to help Severus at this, his hour of need….
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Comments: 21

xRyuzakix [2010-03-12 00:33:04 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could hold him and tell him everything's okay..

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Sempraseverus In reply to xRyuzakix [2010-03-12 04:50:21 +0000 UTC]

That would be nice ...

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xRyuzakix In reply to Sempraseverus [2010-03-12 05:26:12 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Servina [2009-07-20 06:12:52 +0000 UTC]

poor Sev

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Sempraseverus In reply to Servina [2009-07-20 06:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Yup ...

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Servina In reply to Sempraseverus [2009-07-20 06:25:59 +0000 UTC]

:[

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MimiManderly [2009-07-20 02:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Great job in capturing the tortured expression on his face! Poor Severus.

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Sempraseverus In reply to MimiManderly [2009-07-20 02:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ... *sigh*

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HappilyDeluded889 [2009-07-20 01:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Severus!!!

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Sempraseverus In reply to HappilyDeluded889 [2009-07-20 02:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah Severus indeed ...

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Raiderhater1013 [2009-07-19 21:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow powerful as always.

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Sempraseverus In reply to Raiderhater1013 [2009-07-19 22:07:57 +0000 UTC]

:}

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snapesgirl4ever [2009-07-19 20:20:05 +0000 UTC]

poor severus

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Sempraseverus In reply to snapesgirl4ever [2009-07-19 20:49:56 +0000 UTC]

sniff

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snapesgirl4ever In reply to Sempraseverus [2009-07-19 22:18:24 +0000 UTC]

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Eolhin [2009-07-19 20:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Powerful as always. I really love the color and texture you gave Severus's tortured face, and the lack of color in the ghostly Albus. A ghost? Legillimans from a painting? Or a manifestation from Severus's own tortured mind, the part that knows that Albus would not want him hurt like this? Who can say...

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Sempraseverus In reply to Eolhin [2009-07-19 20:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Who indeed ...

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sevsgirl72 [2009-07-19 19:57:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautifully sad and some absolutely wonderful artwork.

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Sempraseverus In reply to sevsgirl72 [2009-07-19 20:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanx ...

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PhalacrocoraxCarbo [2009-07-19 18:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Poor little thing...

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Sempraseverus In reply to PhalacrocoraxCarbo [2009-07-19 18:41:08 +0000 UTC]

:{

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