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Senbonzakura168 — Da Ji WIP 2
Published: 2008-09-11 19:32:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 873; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 18
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Came out a little lighter in the scanner than I thought it would, might edit it =/Worked on the nose, hair (pigtails still need work) and most of the torso 8D should hopefully finish the chest and shoulders soon, and the hand comes last because that's the hardest bit =/
Da Ji, a character in Musou Orochi (basically Dynasty Warriors and Samurai Warriors put together) and one of the main villains (the other one being Orochi himself)
Crits are welcome <3
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-a.k.a. Edga
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OMG THAT'S SOOOOOOOO GREAT IT'S PERFECT I MEAN IT PERFECT
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Aside from Momo's mention of the cross-eyed thing, I cant see anything wrong with it so far.
Cant wait to see the final version.
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Thanks, that's good to know
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She looks great! Since you are asking for critique, she does look a bit cross-eyed, but, since I have never played that game, maybe she's supposed to look that way? (I know some game char.'s are actually designed that way). It really is coming along great though!
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Oh thanks, XD no I don't think she's supposed to look crossed eyed, at least I hope not anyway, I'll try and see what's wrong with it
Thanks for the crit
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The shading looks great. I'll be interested to see this work complete.
Shift her right iris outward. She looks cross-eyed because the inner cornea space of her right eye is smaller than the same space in the other. Since you're looking directly at her face, her eyes and irises should be mirror images of each other.
Bonus symmetry nitpicking - the mark under her left eye is slightly larger than that on the left.
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Thanks, I'm assuming you mean her right iris (to our left)?
Will be a pain to rub out the iris, but I guess it has to be done =/
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You're welcome! Thanks for taking it well! I can't wait to see it done.
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