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Published: 2014-01-26 01:20:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 10486; Favourites: 697; Downloads: 242
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Remake of this old drawing here :3Β
Pretty happy of the improvements!!
I also made her expression more relaxed and changed that sort of windy feeling into a calm one 
Colors are softer and the composition looks better to me, what do you think?? :>
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I love them both so much, I actually can't decide which I like more. So in the end you just have two really good pieces!
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Love this pic !! I really really love it <3 <3 <3 <3Β
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Improvement, yes, but I have to ask: Did she lose weight?
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I love seeing artist improve, congrats
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you improved your skill very well, but I also like the older drawing :>
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Well I think you improved on the eye anatomy which leads to a better expression in this piece. However this one feels a bit more "doll-like", while the last one looks more like a depiction of a living person. Overall, it's a bit hard to compare, because the last one has a bit more detail/higher contrast. I do like the hair in the old piece. But well, you succeeded in painting a softer and calmer work this time, like you intended. And if you like it better, that's what counts. Β
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Thanks for the comment!!
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I also see an improvement; nice work.
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Sono entrambi belli
Comunque complimenti, davvero, rimango sempre stupita e senza parole nel vedere quanto sei bravo, pur avendo la mia etΓ *-*
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I like them both so much! The old one has been a favorite in your gallery of mine for a long time now but this is absolutely stunning. I kinda like the higher contrast in the old one but your technique has improved a lot to this one! 
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I like the original, but this is much better!
Her face looks much softer, her expression is full of wonderment...
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It has a very gentle feel to it, very lovely.Β
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I prefer the original piece because it has more feeling and sensibility in the way you draw it. Also the pose of the original is more realistic compared with this new one which feels a little stiff with her posture. Still you have improve greatly with brushing and lightning the face of the girl... and the hair but I like more the messy hair because you see and feel like it's windy in the captured moment drawn. Great work, I hope this helped you!
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This one lacks some of the finer details that the original possesses - for instance the defined shading of her skin, clothing and hair - however this is still very beautifully done for as soft as it is and personally, I adore both. You ought to make this one into a print as well.
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