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sensual-acid — The Affliction
Published: 2003-01-08 14:29:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Taste the honeyed liquid slide across my parted lips, sweet vitae.Intoxicating seduction in my embrace, till the dawn of a new day.
Entranced by my enticing gaze, your surrender ever-present in your eyes.
A deep, demanding kiss strengthens our bonds, severing ties.
The blood lust strong within your mind, rushing through your rapidly pulsating veins.
Deny yourself not the substance that keeps life; break the reigns.
Away with thee, to thine own dark palace beneath the sleeping mortals haven.
From below, invade their dreams and terrify the minds of the weak and craven.
Rise and make your mark, for those shall tremble and hide.
Dusk till Dawn, therein lies your time to make those, to whom you, they must abide.
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Dusk till Dawn, therein lies your time to make those, whom you'VE TAKEN FROM, they must abide.
is it sort of a meaning like that, where you didn't really say everything, but it should be added in as it's read?
oh well, it's too ambiguous to tell I think...
anyways, the whole poem is very nicely done.
towards the end you kind of trailed off into ye olde english. that kind of made a sharp contrast, but I don't think it helps to do that. maybe use the same style through out the poem?
well then.
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