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Published: 2005-05-03 06:13:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 5596; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 378
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My latest Chouji piece. Title and image should say it all. Done in pencil, inked with Sakura Micron pens, and edited in Adobe PhotoHome Deluxe. Let me know what you guys think.Related content
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Nice work mate, keep the good work up ^^.
Peace, Blind out.
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Thanx, glad you liked it
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OOH very nice! saw this off of gotwoot! chouji is def. one of my favs!
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Salamat, yo! Kainis nga na wala akon'g masyado'ng free time lately na icompleto and dinodrawing ko....
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Pretty good. Some things that were mentioned before- varying line weights would help define the parts better cause things do get confusing, especially with the wraps. It would be fine if the was solely intended to be colored. And the angle of the arm is way too steep. The arm should be much high to match the direction of his eyes.
A note on line weights:
The different levels of line weight (thickness) help create depth. The thinnest lines are for detail and the thickest lines are for outlining objects that are spatially separated from other objects. For example, the lines defining the fingers would be thicker than the detail of the wraps but the lines defining the arm would be thicker than the ones defining the fingers.
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Hey thanks for the comments. Glad you liked 
But yah, thanks for all the advice! And once again, thanks for the compliments and tips
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nice ink job, looks very dbz-ish, but good none the less. the angle the punch is coming from makes it look strange, but i do like it, its oh so very clean
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taht is so cool!!
and good work ..its so clean.. ^^
tho i think he is fatter?!?
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Since you requested for a critique here it goes. On the inking it's nice and clean but you need to add a bit more dimension to it. Right now you have this great looking punch coming out and the arm is getting lost. You need to thicken the line weights of that arm so it really looks like it's coming out at the the viewer. You need to also make sure that you define the wrist and knuckes with thicker line weights as well.
Hope that helps.
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I dig it, tho as mentioned before, you can definitely see the dragonball style showing through.
It will definitely be groovy in color.
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HAHAH! NIICE work pare....ang galing ng lineart mo. ATIIG!
sa'n ka nga pala nakabili ng sakura microns at magkano set o bawat isa..para gusto ko rin kaseng sumubuk eh.
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ehhh? 'di ka dito sa Pinas? anyways, naririto ako sa Naga City sa Pinas...naghanap nga ako kahapon....pero natawa lang ako sa mga attendants sa school supplies at mga malls ditow..lol DI NILA ALAM KUNG ANU YUNG MGA SAKURA PEN..pmabihira naman o!
anyways pare: subukan mo sila..sa sila sa mga pinakmahusay magkuway ditow.
[link] or [link]
o kaya [link] once you get to know them, eh marami ka nagn matutunan sa kanila. hayaan mo't mag-aadd pa ako ng mga pangalan na maari mung ilagay sa iyung most wanted list.^^
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Ayos na nagustuhan mo! Hehe...Anyways, $1.99 dito ang isa'ng Sakura pen, medjo mahal nga eh pero it's worth it. Reliable sila pagdating ng pag-ink ng mga detail sa mga drawing mo. Oh bago ko malimot, may kilala ka ba'ng magaling na magkulay sa PhotoShop. Gusto ko sana pakulayan ito eh. Send mo na lang sakin ang pangalan o pakitannong na lang for me. Thanks and once again, I'm glad na you liked it.
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I think color would help clarify a lot of the details. My eyes are drawn specifically to the arm bands with the many lines indicating folds, whereas I dont' think that is your main focus. I think the drawing would greatly benefit from being colored, if not a full cg, just blocking in colors so that you can take some of the weight off the bandings and put the focus back into the face. You have a nice clean line art to work with too, so just set the layer on multiply and start coloring in photoshop! 
I would also add some sort of line or indication of background so Chouji is not floating in space.
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Thanks for the input. You wouldn't happen to know any good digital colorists out there who'd be willing to color this for me, would you?
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"Good digital artists" are hard to persuade to color pictures for the fun of it, but you might throw the idea out in the project forum: [link]
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^OMFG! That is the best commentary I have ever heard! LOL
DUDE I am buddylisting that person like 10x!
Anyway to the commentary! It has a nice style I think. I like the perspective work. I actually prefer when ppl draw characters from one series in another artist's style. So good work. I could do without the outline around it and he is sstanding kind of slanted,but overall nice. Keep it up!
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You have a dragon ball style. You should stick to your dragon ball style..... Even though dragon ball sucks major balls, and nobody gives 2 shits about Chouji, and you should know that you've wasted your entire life trying to draw like Akira Toriyama, cause nobody likes dragon ball anymore. Not ever since the white man took it from us asians.
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