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Published: 2010-10-18 00:30:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 5190; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 7
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Untoned, unworded preview for my upcoming webcomic GhostBucket. It'll be a mix of the usual JOURNALIN COMIX and short fiction pieces that I'll hopefully do more than once a year.Trying to do things a tad differently than I've been doing them. Is it looking alright so far?
scrapping later.
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different, I'm intrigued. You might want to go back before this goes life, there is a magical beard growth spurt between panels 1 and 3...unless the text will tell us something that's missing from now.
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The text darling. All in the text.
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Alright, things will be known when the text is here.
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does the plot have anything to do with your beard growing a mind of it's own?
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I intend to. But less shitty.
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So now you have the power to touch things and seemingly pass out. That's a lame power bro. That happens to me every time I touch an electric fence.
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I don't know why, but I find this incredibly adorable. :/
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Tuxedo.
sorry I had to join in XD
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So one day you touched a mysterious flat surface then magically was given amazing artistic abilities and turned your house into the back of a moving truck?!
oh, and also gave you a beard.
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Style wise its pert cool! But panel wise it needs work, here are some critiques:
Panel 1:
Not sure if he's supposed to be looking at his hand or not, but if he his, make his eye contact towards his hands.
Panel 2:
Not sure what is going here, I focus more on the negative space than I do the hand.
Panel 3:
Looks good! Since his hand is closer to the frame, you might want to give it heavier inking.
Panel 4:
Looks good!
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The first two panels will make sense once I get toning and dialogue in there... And I'll be cutting the hand out of panel one.
Jesus I hadn't realized how hand-heavy this was...
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You rip on them. Yet- You seem to a dilute variant of their viruses strand.
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Diggin' it! Glad to see some progress on something more long-term, broham.
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