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Snowlily32 [2019-11-17 10:07:06 +0000 UTC]

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This artwork looks so pretty as a whole! The flow of Nezuko's hair as well as the water really gives the piece a sense of direction, and your use of light and shadow in this piece is honestly gorgeous. It really helps highlight where the focus of the piece should be. You did such a great job!

I would say one thing I noticed right away was how the length of the arm seems a little short. I'm not sure if you intended to add some foreshortening on it, but with the way it is now it seems unnaturally short in comparison to the rest of the body. I would say perhaps extending the arm could help make it seem more natural. Also if you did intend for the arm to be slightly foreshortened, it is a little hard to tell since there is not really a clear indication of it being foreshortened (if that makes sense). Perhaps in order to make it more noticeable, you could add some more wrinkles on the sleeve in order to indicate the foreshortening, since in my opinion it is easier to notice whether something is foreshortened or not if you can see the clear indication of overlapping wrinkles.

All in all, this is a wonderfully composed piece, and I hope you keep up the brilliant work! (> v <)

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lavellyne [2019-11-13 20:33:51 +0000 UTC]

I love the colours a lot! They're so dynamic and contrasting, they remind me of Caravaggio's kind of shading.
The shadows and the details are very well done. Keep up the good work!

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Burke23 [2019-11-13 19:06:52 +0000 UTC]

That's so beautiful

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Maxikanec [2019-11-10 14:56:45 +0000 UTC]

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Jadago-Art [2019-11-10 11:32:47 +0000 UTC]

This turned out very nice.

I like the details of the background and the design of the whole work.

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