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SerdiMaaka β€” :CE: Miracle

Published: 2013-09-29 09:01:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1063; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 2
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Description This is my contest entry in *AKIMOTO-TSUBAKI 's contest
and today is deadline so I guess it's the last entry x'D
How I got the idea:
Just walked through the kitchen listening to the song and in the intro, before the lyrics begun this plopped in my mind :3
and for me this song is says you should never stop hoping, you can be saved by miracle ~ and if your drowning in the dark someone can come and bring you back to the light. Everytime in every situation <3

Hope I got it right ;w; I just thought about the singer of the song singing to her <3 and I can't help but thinking about light and sprakles when hearing the word miracle <3
hope you'll like it

EDIT I won and got first place!!!

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Comments: 34

ElithianFox [2013-09-29 09:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


In my opinion, this is one of your best pieces so far. You have combined many techniques, being colouring, shading, textures, stacked layers for atmosphere, etc. The overview is amazing and shows how much improvement you have made over time.

The side of the face, as well as the way the hair looks in the water and the difference between open eyes and closed eyes in the copied background layer are what I like the most about the way the character was drawn. The clothing could get some extra watery effect, right now they look too much like clothes would when they aren't soaking wet. Most of the proportions seem alright, I only think the feet and legs could use some improvement.

The background is simple yet fitting for the picture. At the first glance, it looks like there's a busy and complex background, while in fact, the textures only made it seem that way, and I think that takes skill. I find it difficult to see what is happening at the right of the picture, behind the feet, and if that is part of the character or part of the background.

The colouring has been done, as in most of your work, in a very special and unique way. You have a great style of colouring and shading going, so I'd say keep that up! One thing that bothers me is that the pants look more like a whole lot of colours stacked, rather than yellow pants with a blue watery texture added over it. The light coming from the top of the picture is what makes it all so interesting.


Altogether, keep up the good work! You're definitely getting somewhere.

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SerdiMaaka In reply to ElithianFox [2013-09-29 10:35:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much <3

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ElithianFox In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-29 10:42:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem! c:

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MaoMint [2013-10-18 14:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful background! I always like seeing underwater and night time pictures!
It's nice how we see this "water patern! on her face and i love how the light falls into the water!
Maybe you should add toes next time? I'm sure you could do it! Because that's the only thing that feels a little off about this picture. But other than that it's really great!
It's also nice how we get a close up version of her in the background with a slightly different expression!

Good luck with te contest by the way. : )

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SerdiMaaka In reply to MaoMint [2013-10-18 14:35:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

you mean not drawing shoes??? I have Problems drawing feet x'D

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and I qon already *w* ~ added it know to the description ~

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MaoMint In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-10-18 14:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh they are shoes? Sorry I thought she had.. um "skin socks" XD (that's what my friend called it when I once skipped the toes on a character <<')
Anyways if they are shoes I take my comment back haha O.O

ANd ah - grats! : )

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SerdiMaaka In reply to MaoMint [2013-10-18 14:46:34 +0000 UTC]

haha xD

but I have Problems with shoes as well, they tend to look like socks :'D

thanks x3

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KayleyRogue [2013-10-06 10:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Very-very-very NICE!!!!!!!! Β  Β 

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SerdiMaaka In reply to KayleyRogue [2013-10-06 11:44:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks x3

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Aloubell [2013-10-01 06:03:07 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS IS SO PRETTY AND AWESOME



First off, the way you color is so unique! I cant really put my finger on it, but it REALLY looks nice~!

I totally wasnt expecting this kind of picture! And yet...IT WORKS SO WELL! VERY relevant to the song as i can see this kind of scene happening in the opening sequence

And that light shining into the ocean like that? Pure awesomeness and wonderful idea And the fact that you have her afterimage slightly opening her eyes like that puts SO much more meaning than just having her eyes closed like the original--and this was a smart decision.

Btw, ur handwriting is really pretty Fits really well with the tone of the pic~

Aki looks amazing too Just...LOVE


Thank you so very much for participating in this contest!
I wish you luck!

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SerdiMaaka In reply to Aloubell [2013-10-01 14:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ~
and you're welcome ~
can't wait to see the results <3
making it was actually really fun, I just had much problems with making air-bubbles...x'D

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NekoFluffy [2013-09-30 18:08:38 +0000 UTC]

wowΒ its so wonderful^^

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SerdiMaaka In reply to NekoFluffy [2013-09-30 19:08:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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Mizalee [2013-09-29 19:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Omg this is simply amazing!

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SerdiMaaka In reply to Mizalee [2013-09-30 04:22:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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Mizalee In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-30 05:24:51 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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Omnimon1996 [2013-09-29 16:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Mamma mia that's beautiful!

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SerdiMaaka In reply to Omnimon1996 [2013-09-29 16:51:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks <3

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Omnimon1996 In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-29 16:57:43 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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asdlaker [2013-09-29 16:28:19 +0000 UTC]

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD!!

I dare to say this might be your best work so far!! *_*

Really impressive, everything sparkle in this picture!! MANY MANY compliments and good luck for the contest!!

I am quite positive you will do great!!

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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 16:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!! ;w;

I also think this is one of my best <3 though it didn't take that long...well the character didn't took long and for the rest I just played a bit xD what really annoyed me were the air bubbles...

and thanks again ~ I really hope to win QwQ and I really should make such artwork with my own OCs x3 eeeeh don't have an idea....

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asdlaker In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-29 16:49:14 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome!!

Whoa, it didn't even took you so long?? *_*

You are all so great artist, it is a pleasure to watch!!

I hope for you too! And don't worry, you will come up with and idea for your OC soon or late!! :3

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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 16:53:25 +0000 UTC]

yes I'd say...5 hours? :3

thanks <3

and sure...I actually have a lot of ideas but I always forget them when I'm drawind x'D right now I wanna try colour outlines drawing my dragonic OC with whom I currently obssessed with *w* ~Β www.deviantart.com/art/collab-…

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asdlaker In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-29 17:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Β°_Β° would be 5 years for me! xD Maybe not even enough! xD


lol, you are a bit forgetful!

Hey, that's a cute fellow!! Go for it my friend!! ^_^

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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 18:06:02 +0000 UTC]

I know TTwTT

thanks OwO I like him a lot recently x3 ~

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LittleFightboy [2013-09-29 13:03:49 +0000 UTC]

An grate picture and a exelent job is that.

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SerdiMaaka In reply to LittleFightboy [2013-09-29 14:10:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks^^

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LittleFightboy In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-29 14:43:40 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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FluffyAndSweet [2013-09-29 11:11:21 +0000 UTC]

waaahhh super schΓΆn~

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SerdiMaaka In reply to FluffyAndSweet [2013-09-29 11:12:52 +0000 UTC]

danke^^

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SmlArt [2013-09-29 10:28:49 +0000 UTC]

great work, lovely colours and water! g'luck with the contest =3

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SerdiMaaka In reply to SmlArt [2013-09-29 10:36:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much <3

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Sug4rNbl00d [2013-09-29 09:28:57 +0000 UTC]

wonderful color u make the light and shadow its look kh character ^^
but try practice on body its look something missing

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SerdiMaaka In reply to Sug4rNbl00d [2013-09-29 10:36:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^

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