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ElithianFox [2013-09-29 09:15:48 +0000 UTC]
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In my opinion, this is one of your best pieces so far. You have combined many techniques, being colouring, shading, textures, stacked layers for atmosphere, etc. The overview is amazing and shows how much improvement you have made over time.
The side of the face, as well as the way the hair looks in the water and the difference between open eyes and closed eyes in the copied background layer are what I like the most about the way the character was drawn. The clothing could get some extra watery effect, right now they look too much like clothes would when they aren't soaking wet. Most of the proportions seem alright, I only think the feet and legs could use some improvement.
The background is simple yet fitting for the picture. At the first glance, it looks like there's a busy and complex background, while in fact, the textures only made it seem that way, and I think that takes skill. I find it difficult to see what is happening at the right of the picture, behind the feet, and if that is part of the character or part of the background.
The colouring has been done, as in most of your work, in a very special and unique way. You have a great style of colouring and shading going, so I'd say keep that up! One thing that bothers me is that the pants look more like a whole lot of colours stacked, rather than yellow pants with a blue watery texture added over it. The light coming from the top of the picture is what makes it all so interesting.
Altogether, keep up the good work! You're definitely getting somewhere.
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SerdiMaaka In reply to MaoMint [2013-10-18 14:35:10 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
you mean not drawing shoes??? I have Problems drawing feet x'D
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and I qon already *w* ~ added it know to the description ~
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MaoMint In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-10-18 14:39:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh they are shoes? Sorry I thought she had.. um "skin socks" XD (that's what my friend called it when I once skipped the toes on a character <<')
Anyways if they are shoes I take my comment back haha O.O
ANd ah - grats! : )
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SerdiMaaka In reply to MaoMint [2013-10-18 14:46:34 +0000 UTC]
haha xD
but I have Problems with shoes as well, they tend to look like socks :'D
thanks x3
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KayleyRogue [2013-10-06 10:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Very-very-very NICE!!!!!!!! Β Β
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NekoFluffy [2013-09-30 18:08:38 +0000 UTC]
wowΒ its so wonderful^^
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Mizalee In reply to SerdiMaaka [2013-09-30 05:24:51 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^^
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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 16:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!!! ;w;
I also think this is one of my best <3 though it didn't take that long...well the character didn't took long and for the rest I just played a bit xD what really annoyed me were the air bubbles...
and thanks again ~ I really hope to win QwQ and I really should make such artwork with my own OCs x3 eeeeh don't have an idea....
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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 16:53:25 +0000 UTC]
yes I'd say...5 hours? :3
thanks <3
and sure...I actually have a lot of ideas but I always forget them when I'm drawind x'D right now I wanna try colour outlines drawing my dragonic OC with whom I currently obssessed with *w* ~Β www.deviantart.com/art/collab-β¦
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SerdiMaaka In reply to asdlaker [2013-09-29 18:06:02 +0000 UTC]
I know TTwTT
thanks OwO I like him a lot recently x3 ~
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FluffyAndSweet [2013-09-29 11:11:21 +0000 UTC]
waaahhh super schΓΆn~
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SmlArt [2013-09-29 10:28:49 +0000 UTC]
great work, lovely colours and water! g'luck with the contest =3
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SerdiMaaka In reply to SmlArt [2013-09-29 10:36:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much <3
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Sug4rNbl00d [2013-09-29 09:28:57 +0000 UTC]
wonderful color u make the light and shadow its look kh character ^^
but try practice on body its look something missing
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