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SereanaDaisyBuns — Broken Wings
Published: 2012-09-11 03:40:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3720; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 3
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I've been through a lot since my childhood and that's kind of what this picture represents. Almost all my life I've imagined myself with wings, just as a thing to keep me inspired. As of late I've felt that I've lost touch with that child that kept me inspired.I hope you like it~
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Thanks for the critique, I'll make sure to keep that in mind while I'm redrawing it. ovo7
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You're very welcome. <3 I look forward to the redraw then! 
Ohm, and I stumbled upon this recently: [link]
Maye it can be of help. ouo
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OHMYGOODNESS! THANK YOU SO MUCH! This will be beyond helpful by making it easier for me to draw children <333
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I'm really happy if I could be of help!<3
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your comments really resonate with what the piece shows. very well done! it makes me think of the songs broken wings by mr. mister & broken angel by hanson. may you always find something that inspires you. you have real talent.
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Thank you very much c': and I will have to look up that song!
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Why thank you very much!
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Thanks <3 c:
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your welcome
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Lovely work! I love the foggy/rainy feeling to the image! Very touching story too.
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I'll make sure to keep that look when I edit it ovob and thanks v u v <333
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Adorable and simbolic idea!
Congratulations from Paris!
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I like the idea behind this drawing, and it's been executed fairly well!
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Tell me what you think can be improved. ovo I'm editing the picture due to a lot of critiques xD;;
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Oh, okay, I'lltry >w< Well, the idea is really great, but the proportions are a little bit off, with the heads being a bit too big. The arm of the adult (the upper part) is too short compared to the lower part (if you look at your own arm, you can see that the 'lower part' of your arm probably goes a bit under your shoulder and your hand cover the rest of the stretch, if that makes sense. owo) Your hands are pretty good though! (Better than mine anyway!) Maybe just make them a little bit bigger? (Try putting your hand on your face, you see it actually covers most of it, or.. at least mine does XD; ) The colors are well chosen, giving a good aura, it just seems a little bit as if it blurs together since they're kinda soft (or else it's me who loves making contrast, I don't know), but good nonetheless. Someone already mentioned the text, so I'll let that be that. ovo But otherwise it's a really really good concept and you did well with it, specially the lines! How! (My lines are shaky as hell, excuse me as I'm a bit jealous. uwu; )
Anyway, I hope it's useful for anything, and sorry if it's too much, I've never really tried this before >w< Keep up the great work!!
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I'll take what you said to mind~ Q v Q;; I hope I can make it more prettyful~
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i like the idea bout the glow. if you worked in different layers you could even improve it by make the peopels a bit clearer
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That's what I plan on doing ovo though it'll be a bit more updated on how they look.
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thats good. because i like the emotion the pic submit
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Thanks c: I'm glad you like what I've made so far~ still hoping I can make it just as good.... with the adjustments.
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the pail almost opaque-ness of the image brings so much mood to it
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Thank you, I hope to recapture that mood when I redraw it. c:
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i think this is a cool idea, though as a small critique, i think the image would be stronger without the "broken wings" text, since there's no effects that help blend it in and i think it's just flattening out the image. i would also scoot the figures a little farther away from the image borders, just so they aren't almost touching.
good atmosphere, though!
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I'll be editing it on SAI right now c: since I don't have the original PSD file anymore.
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I love the foggy mist at the bottom! Looks really cool. A few suggestions though, maybe tone down the glow around the faces/bodies? It makes it kind of hard to see the linework (which from what I can see is really well done!.) and also tighten up the font, if you use photoshop you would adjust the leading in the "character" window. Other than that though very nice job and message (I understand 
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It's too late for me to edit it ;3;
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ah didn't save the .psd? lol that's alright, just something to keep in mind for next time ^_^
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