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Published: 2007-03-01 01:26:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I sigh,
One more mile passes quickly
no one places hour glasses in my hand
So i'm talking to you solftly,
But you speak to, so I don't think you understand

I sing,
I need your attention, so I'll sing this loudly
You used to be entranced by a simple hum
It got you to listen a lot quicker than shouting
Your grip hasn't tightend, so my hearts a little numb

I beg,
My past doesn't affect the way you feel for me
Like yours tends to do
I've stooped under some low ceilings
Just to fall in love with you

I hope
thunder holds you tightly
to think this title just might catch your eye...
   
I act,
My script says the usual nonsense
I should just let these petals whither
so from behind my white picket fence
I let these demons deliver

I remember,
Old love letters burned,
so quickly I let each one drop
I let them escape me
because I know I can never stop...

I know
My smile has never faded so quickly
as it does when you're away
You could be enchanted, or you could ignore this.
I love you either way.
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Comments: 1

Lady-RyuuXX87 [2007-03-20 16:44:35 +0000 UTC]

You have a typo in the first stanza, line 4 'solftly'

It was really interesting and very sweet, nice job with the words!

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