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SerisaBibi — Ariel transformation comic page 2

Published: 2018-12-01 23:36:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 48747; Favourites: 225; Downloads: 0
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Marypuff [2019-08-19 03:34:53 +0000 UTC]

This story really looks good, but I has some continuity errors.  
 
First of all, how is Ariel/Vanessa find the tine trident is she's a giant now? Besides, didn't she leave it back in the palace when she began to grow-up?  
 
Second, where did Ariel/Vanessa get that crown?  
 
Finally, that was pretty quick from Triton to appear. And how is that he still have the trident and his crown? Also, I believe the potions Ursula just drop in her cauldron because Triton suddenly scared her with his repentine appearance will have consequences.

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Bip-bipator [2018-12-02 00:16:01 +0000 UTC]

And this time, she don't have the contract as a shield against the Trident might.

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Dracoknight545 [2018-12-01 23:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Well looks like Ursula didn't have to wait so long for the trident.

Also I like the idea of Vanessa being Ursula's niece 

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AceCubed In reply to Dracoknight545 [2018-12-02 05:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't Ariel Ursula's niece?  I believe Triton and Ursula were siblings in the Brothers Grimm tale.  And Ursula was Ariels Aunt.

Also I believe this is a continuation of this page: 

I really wish Serisabibi would add links to her comics.

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Dracoknight545 In reply to AceCubed [2018-12-02 18:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Well I’m not sure but the Little mermaid was written by Hans Christian Anderson not the Brothers Grimm. Also Triton and Ursula in the movie might had an relationship of some kind either a former friends or relative in the past hinted in the first movie but no clue on what kind was it.

I know

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