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Published: 2009-10-07 22:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Description Hypocrite

Breathe in, breathe out
Forget the pain
Swallow the doubt
Hope has been slain

What else remains?
Falling…falling
Tangled in chains
Voices calling

World overflows
Blood runs down the wall
No one else knows
No one sees it at all

Faster and faster
Soul becomes faint
Rip it out, sure
Some kind of saint

Hypocrite, hypocrite
Every word a lie
Taking it, twisting it
Go on, give it a try

Like what you feel?
Enjoying the sin?
Fates you will seal
With this power within

Condemn me
Condemn them
You’ll end up losing
In the end



Written By: Sarah McCary
October 7, 2009
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Comments: 7

Out-4-Dragons-Blood [2012-12-14 20:25:09 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me soooooooooooo much of my ex-girlfriend. I swear you're writing directly about her. Great job!

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seshinault In reply to Out-4-Dragons-Blood [2012-12-14 21:08:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Out-4-Dragons-Blood In reply to seshinault [2012-12-14 21:16:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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angelofastar [2012-04-20 15:00:10 +0000 UTC]

hi, this is amazing
there's a really nice flow to this and I love the rhythm and pace
nice poem

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seshinault In reply to angelofastar [2012-04-20 22:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

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Dark-and-Dreamless [2009-10-11 02:26:44 +0000 UTC]

I can really relate to this one. Its wonderfully written. Great job, Sarah. <3

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seshinault In reply to Dark-and-Dreamless [2009-10-11 04:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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