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Sethair — Flight
Published: 2006-05-01 00:11:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Run. Don't stop running, he told himself.  He hardly touched the ground as he sprinted through the dense cover of the woods, his bare feet hardly making a sound.  Trees darted past on either side, barely visible in hte dull moonlight, their branches lacerating his bare arms.  He didn't care,  He had to escape.

Thud.  Bark splintered and shot in every direction as the shaft of an arrow embeeded itself into a tree not inches from his head.  He dove and rolled, narrowly avoiding the deadly prjectiles.

Sweat streaked his body from head to toe, and his muscles ached from exertion.  The pounding of his heart dominated his hearing.  So loud, he thought.  They could track me on noise alone.  He didn't need to look back; he knew the hunters gained ground every minute.

If I don't take a stand, I'm as good as dead.  The thought flashed through his mind, and on instinct, he acted.  Diving headfirst into a largely thicketed area, he lay prone and steadied his breathing.  Slowly, ever so slowly, he crawled behind a massive oak and crouched, waiting.  It took but a few moments for him to pick out hte barely audible sound of padded feet on the forest floor.  His hunters drew near.

The hunters stopped abruptly at what appeared to have been the end of his trail.  No words passed between them as they began to systematically search the surrounding area.  The minutes seemed to slow as he waited, expecting discovery at any given moment.  He tensed as one of the hunters slowly walked around the great oak behind which he concealed himself.  The hunter faced away from him, but even in the faint light of the moon, the hunter's features were strikingly clear.

The creature's muscles rippled as he slowly turned towards the concealed man.  Garbed entirely in black, the hunter appeared all but invisible in the faint light.  As the creature continued to turn, the man nearly gasped.  The creature's face seemed bleached of all color; deathly pale.  A dull red glow resided where eyes should have been, seeming to pierce straight through him.

They sent Kalinar against me!  Questions raced through his head as he stared in utter horror at the demon standing before him.  At that moment, those eyes seemed to meet his, and a sense of dead swept over him.  Cautiously, he freed the long assassin's dagger at his belt from it's sheath.  Suddenly, the Kalinar's head snapped up, and with a final glance around, it strode off, leaving nothing but an eerie silence behind.

The man relaxed perceptibly, sighing in relief.  For the moment, it seemed, the hunt was over.  Quietly, he stood up and began to pick his way through the foliage at a slow jog towards the nearby city of Al'anar.  He knew the person he sought resided within its walls.  The beginnings of a sunrise filled the horizon as the lithe form of Talis N'fir vanished behind Al'Anar's outer wall.
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Comments: 9

horsebackrider15 [2007-01-05 14:44:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah yeah... hmmph, you say you'll never be as good as me ?? I think you're pretty good this is a lovely prologue... *sigh* I should write one...that could be fun... Lovely descriptions

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Sethair In reply to horsebackrider15 [2007-01-05 16:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment, but keep in mind, i'm a couple grades ahead of you, and found a teacher who was interested in seeing me improve. This was a while ago I wrote it, about the time that I was working with that teacher, so I'll be sure to post what I'm working on now. Thanks .

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horsebackrider15 In reply to Sethair [2007-01-05 17:59:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah I did notice that... I do wish I had a teacher who was interested! I go to a cyber school however, and time on the computer is boosted, that is where I do nearly all my writing because I have it all recorded... I write poetry and the like offline. I guessed this was a little while ago... and I'd love to see what you're working on

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Sethair In reply to horsebackrider15 [2007-01-05 22:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I don't know where I'd be without a computer, it's so much faster to type, but sometimes I have to go outside to write, just to get away from being indoors all day. And I just submitted a piece of what I'm currently working on

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horsebackrider15 In reply to Sethair [2007-01-06 23:03:40 +0000 UTC]

omw! I knoow!! Now my handwriting is horrible... I read some of it, maybe I have more time to finish reading it now...
Outside? really? do you live in rural or urban? I live rural but its near the city (like 20 min) and its a big city...we have aprox 27 acres of land though...trees and the like. its beautiful...I have trouble focusing to write outside though

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Sethair In reply to horsebackrider15 [2007-01-07 03:10:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm in a suburban area, so there's not too much land where I live, but it's also not very far from more rural areas.

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horsebackrider15 In reply to Sethair [2007-01-08 15:07:22 +0000 UTC]

oohh okis...well outside could be nice then..

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rDarkchild [2006-05-01 00:22:56 +0000 UTC]

a really good, specially @ this time of the night. good work.

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Sethair In reply to rDarkchild [2006-05-01 00:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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