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sethron — What Truth

Published: 2009-06-29 10:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 521; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 22
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Description This is the final; probably the hardest of all three. Truly the one that I was most invested in, although it seems the least thought out artistically.

What innocence had I,

that your breath was all I
needed to sustain me.

What a fool I've been,

Waiting for you to come
back for me.

What games I played,

Believing in fairytale love,
eternal and absolute

What truth I found,

When I finally learned
I was alone.
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Comments: 9

DiceMasterOM3G4 [2009-07-04 23:51:05 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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sethron In reply to DiceMasterOM3G4 [2009-12-11 01:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Audio-Vector [2009-07-02 21:35:42 +0000 UTC]

What Love I Wanted,
To be grasped and held softly,

How Much Pain I Feel,
To know you would not be near,

All The Anger I Bear,
For all the lies now seen
through and through,

The Happy Future I See Ahead,
The one without you...

Saw this poem and couldn't resist . Much excellent job, Sethy. Stories go so much better visual cues


WTF how did get in my comments. BACK WITH YOU, TARD GLOMPER, BACK TO THE SMELLY PITS WITH YOU!!

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sethron In reply to Audio-Vector [2009-12-11 01:34:07 +0000 UTC]

That's quite beautiful, and comes to a very positive ending.

I suppose it works today, even if then it seemed so far away, that future.

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Audio-Vector In reply to sethron [2009-12-11 02:33:03 +0000 UTC]

The funny thing about life is, we may be able change what we did and there isn't any "turning back" points, but we can shape our futures so we never repeat the mistakes of the past and move on to a future that we want.

Life is life, and it always moves forward. Don't worry about what's coming in the future, just think of the present, the here and now. That's my piece

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Slayer-1412 [2009-06-29 21:26:47 +0000 UTC]

you need one

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sethron In reply to Slayer-1412 [2009-12-11 01:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Sweetheart. I did need one.

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RomanticDetective [2009-06-29 17:41:12 +0000 UTC]

awww T^T I like it, it's sad and makes me wanna cry but I like the art ^^

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sethron In reply to RomanticDetective [2009-12-11 01:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I love the art. It's unfortunate that it was a hard day for me.

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