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setmyworldintomotion — turning five into four. by-nc-nd
Published: 2014-04-12 02:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 648; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Description i. gregory,
with his sun-kissed skin & microscopic eyes,
knows not to don rachel's rose-coloured glasses
or take her reality classes.
although he is swimming in disbelief,
he can't help feeling like he's mourning
something that he's not yet lost.

ii. rachel's forte was never gardening.
her family tree could rain its leaves all day
but she will not be the rake, clawing
its way through the earth
to neatly bundle a bouquet;
she can not see ian's pleas
through a rose lens with embers in her eyes.

iii. ian is not afraid to get his hands dirty.
if an eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind,
then maybe rachel was the sacrifice,
& he will not hesitate to dig deep
to ensure that emily is satisfied.

iv. emily is suffering under the oppression
of a king that she did not bargain for.
every day is her december:
she freezes the touch of each man
at speeds that question if angels roam the earth,
& prays that they do.
with just one blink,
all the colours from her life retired.

v. florence knows what the others do not:
water what you sow & it will grow.
fallen tears become replaced with flowers
& one day, they will meet again.
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Comments: 11

shep4life [2014-08-10 20:03:10 +0000 UTC]

This is quite a unique way to describe the five stages of grief using seasons and very clever! I enjoyed it! I wrote one about the five stages..would you like to read it?

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setmyworldintomotion In reply to shep4life [2014-08-26 10:35:41 +0000 UTC]

of course i would! &, thank you!

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shep4life In reply to setmyworldintomotion [2014-08-26 16:56:05 +0000 UTC]

So welcome and cool!

shep4life.deviantart.com/art/T…

Enjoy! Tell me what you think!

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tuiskulumi [2014-04-13 01:10:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm just glad my name wasn't in there!  

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setmyworldintomotion In reply to tuiskulumi [2014-04-13 07:15:28 +0000 UTC]

haw haw. thanks for the favourite!

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tuiskulumi In reply to setmyworldintomotion [2014-04-13 20:20:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. You know you coukd have just posted it on my profile.

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setmyworldintomotion In reply to tuiskulumi [2014-04-14 02:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Was killing two birds with one stone.

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tuiskulumi In reply to setmyworldintomotion [2014-04-14 03:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Got ya. Ready to cull this conversation now? 

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setmyworldintomotion In reply to tuiskulumi [2014-04-14 04:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Haha you know me too well.

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ReiReiSerenade [2014-04-12 17:14:25 +0000 UTC]

My name is Rachel   But, seriously, great poem

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setmyworldintomotion In reply to ReiReiSerenade [2014-04-13 07:15:53 +0000 UTC]

hahaha.
thank you very much, & for the favourite!

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